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Thank You For Your Service
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Why are Veterans living on the streets? Why are Veterans going hungry? Why are Veterans not getting the decent medical care they deserve?

Why does no one give a damn?


Poem Artwork


See if this will get you through
the month:  is this enough to
pay your bills?  Is this enough
to keep the roof over your heads?
Is this enough to keep your lights
on?  Is this enough to feed you
and your family?  If not, too bad:
thank you for your service ...

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (9/14)

United States Air Force, '83 - 85

GOD BLESS OUR TROOPS!!!!!!

   

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 Reviews of "Thank You For Your Service"
Reviewed by Chase Von
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
I would love for you to one day read my short story, 'The Bum'...
Too true above in many cases and love and light to you
Chase

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on September 17, 2007
~Why does no one give a damn?~ Because this society is filled with ignorance fueled by overindulgence!
I know, I can make a difference, - And I Certainly Give A Damn!!!

Everyday I pray for our troops - every damn day!
Rebecca~

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2007
Tom and Georg said it best!

Our wonderful consumer-public people are blind to the street people. I saw it in southern California. We had 100,000+ homeless people (men, women, kids) in Los Angeles County alone. But no one ever saw them.

During my upper-division studies, I did a research paper on the homeless. My thesis was that people became homeless because they had lost all elements of their economic support system. After completing 350 sit-down discussion/interviews with homeless persons, I found that I had to mitigate my original these - because my thesis did not fit the homeless Vietnam Vets. There were eight vets, all of them men, and most of them Marines. All eight of them were homeless, living on the streets, and still very angry at Americans. All eight of them had dropped out, no more working to pay taxes to an America which did not support them during the Vietnam War. Self-serving Americans turned against those soldiers. Americans were blind to them then, and Americans remain blind to them now that these vets are living homeless on our mean streets.

Each of these discussion/interviews took place out on the city sidewalks, maybe sitting up against a convenience store wall, maybe standing on a busy street corner. And I remember one impression. Countless American citizens were walking by. We were quite visible. But the American people walked wide around us, always seeming to be looking in some other direction. We may as well have been invisible.

No wonder those homeless vets are still angry.

Thanks, Karla, for taking a stand!

Ted

Reviewed on September 15, 2007
KARLA... THANK YOU for your actual SERVICE... and thank you for writing THIS!

WHY DOES NO ONE 'GIVE A DAMN?' ... TWO REASONS:

1. APATHY... the APATHY of the American Public... EACH AND EVERY CITIZEN IS TOO DAMNED 'WRAPPED UP' IN THEIR OWN LITTLE WORLDS, TO GET OFF THEIR ASSES AND DO SOMETHING, ANYTHING... WRITE AN ARTICLE LIKE THIS! WRITE TO CONGRESS! WRITE TO THE PRESIDENT! WRITE LETTERS TO EDITORS OF NEWSPAPERS! SEND OUT EMAILS! MAKE A PHONE CALL!

WHAT IF ONLY 40,000 AUTHORS HERE AT AD TOOK THE FEW MINUTES TO WRITE TO MATT, WOULD IT GET HIS ATTENTION? WOULD HE COME DOWN FROM HIS 'IVORY TOWER?'
ONE OR TWO OF US 'BITCHING AND MOANING' JUST WON'T 'CUT IT!'

OUR COUNTRY IS 'GOING TO HELL IN A HANDBASKET' AND NO ONE 'GIVES A SHIT!'

2. GOD... G-O-D... GODLESS... AMERICA HAS FORSAKEN GOD! WE HAVE QUIETLY ( APATHY AGAIN ) ALLOWED ONLY NINE RAT-BASTARD SUPREME COURT JUSTICES TO DICTATE AWAY OUR MORALS, THE MORALS OF 300,000,000... THREE HUNDRED MILLION 'LAZY, FAT, APATHETIC' INHABITANTS OF THIS ONCE-GREAT NATION, HAVE JUST LAID DOWN AND DIED!

"GIVE IT TO MIKEY - LET MIKEY DO IT" WHO THE HELL DO WE THINK MIKEY IS?

HOW ABOUT... 666... 6-6-6... SATAN, THE DEVIL, MEPHISTOPHELES, THE PRINCE OF DARKNESS, ADOLPH HITLER, SADAM HUSSEIN. OSAMA BEN LADEN, AND NOW, THE BUSHITS!

IF WE DON'T PUT GOD IN CHARGE, PUT GOD FIRST, THEN WE ARE JUST BLIND, STUPID SHEEP!

NEGLECTED VETERANS ? LACK OF HONOR FOR THEM? LACK OF CARE FOR THEM? C'MON PILGRIMS - THAT'S ONLY THE TIP OF THE ICEBERG THAT'S ABOUT TO SINK AMERICA!

NEGLECTED STARVING SENIORS - CRIME - GANGS - DRUGS - PORNOGRAPHY - PROSTITUTION - DIABETES EPIDEMIC - OBESITY EPIDEMIC - HOMELESS - SLUMS & GHETTOS... BREEDING GROUNDS FOR RADICALS AND FANATICS *** IN BALTIMORE CITY ALONE THERE ARE 40,000 VACANT HOUSES *** LET ME REPEAT THAT, FORTY THOUSAND EMPTY BOARDED-UP BUILDINGS, THAT COULD BE UTILIZED TO HELP POOR PEOPLE ***

WHY ALL CAPS? 'CAUSE I'M S-C-R-E-A-M-I-N-G AT THE TOP OF MY LUNGS!

Sorry, Karla... got a tad carried away. WHY? 'Cause I'M PISSED! 'Cause the STUPID SILENT MAJORITY HAS CAUSED ALL OF THIS, BECAUSE OF IN-ACTION!

WE CAN ALL CUSS N' BLAME "THEM" - "THEY" - "THE RAT-BASTARD GOVERNMENT" ...
BUT, ULTIMATELY, "WE THE PEOPLE" HAVE ALLOWED IT!

LIKE PONTIUS PILATE, WE HAVE WASHED OUR HANDS... LATIN LAVABO: "I WILL WASH MY HANDS AMONG THE INNOCENT..."

IN SHORT, GOD MAY NOT EVER 'BLESS' AMERICA --- UNTIL AND UNLESS THE MAJORITY GETS OFF THEIR ARSES, AND ASKS FOR IT... AND E-A-R-N-S IT BY A-C-T-I-O-N !!!

Peace! TOM "BIG MOUTH"...





Reviewed on September 15, 2007
How right you are!
Love and respect,
R&B

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
USMC, NAM 63-67, "wet-team", tunnel rats.
The soldiers continue to fade away and no one is noticing it.
Semper Fi
Georg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Not a veteran myself...but I know the struggle!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Coming from a military family I can feel the anger, and I attend to agree with it, thanks for sharing, maybe you should send these to our goverment...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
important words--this should not go on--those who defend our country and what it stands for should be cared for better than this-their basic medical needs arent met much less day to day needs for many who are disabled

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Agreed...UNITED STATES NAVY 72 - 75...ed

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Sadly, this type of behavior goes all the way back to the beginning. Unfortunately this is nothing new, our government has promised veterans many things and then pulled back at the last minute only to leave them all twisting in the wind. Pick your war and the veterans were trampled on sooner or later by the government.

Living conditions are deplorable for military personnel and their families. Base housing is more like shanty towns, run down and bleak. Commissaries carry a variety of products and are supposed to be about 1/2 the price as the outside world. Yet, what they are given to sell are more or less below acceptable standards. We as a nation have never done right by all who volunteered or were drafted. Great write....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Amen sister, write on dear friend...I don't understand how our veterans can be forgotten, or not taken care of, after all...where would we be without them? Great write!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
WRITE ON KARLA !!!!!! YOU SAID IT ALL..........m

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
COLD and BRUTAL but needed for the WAKE UP CALL!
This is so true and full of pain for the men and women who went to war for ME, MY CHILDREN and MY COUNTRY!
If I can I always try to help.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
All one can do is shake ones head and hope that the people who pass the legislation to allow this to go on will be meted out justice by a higher power than us someday.

Fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
A sad state of affairs; your message is clear, Karla. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
I hear ya Karla! If there is one thing I do not think any American would argue about is more benefits for the military. And it is not just THIS administration. Clinton did not like the military and thought they were not needed. Rubber bullets? Take away thier pay and means of protection. A sad thing.

Reviewed by Charles Keller
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Heart breaking and unfortunately true. This administration has a terrible record when it comes to their treatment of veterans.

I have been working on a book on PTSD and have had many conversations with other Vietnam vets. These Iraqi and Afghanistan vets will suffer the consequences of these battles for decades.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Through your poetry I'm learning much about -another America-
Where is the compassion in the Govt. Is there not an equavlent to the British legion, or the RAF homes, etc?
Frightfully uncivil. There should be civil unrest until it is sorted... TY

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Sadly, it seems no one gives a damn or he wouldn't be in that horrific situation. Sick, isn't it!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
And Uncle Sam's Boot up is Butt
Thats how our vets are treated, the Senate and Congress don't
give a good rats ass......
But they sure love to play General
Monday morning quater backs
with the on going war.
Peace be wit you

Love
William

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Karla it is heart breaking to see how they are treated, they should be treated like Royality. Thank you for the eye opener.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Karla, if my b/p goes up......GRRRRR!!!

You have hit hard with this shattering, heartbreaking, eye opening, power-driven write. Yes. YES! Why ARE we taking care of those who don't deserve to be here or taking care of the world when we can't even take care of our OWN? WHY are we letting our vets go hungry or living on subservient incomes, why are they being denied the help that they (you among them) so RIGHTFULLY deserve?? WHY?? This needs to be SHOUTED from the rooftops; this needs to be shared with our government. Let them SEE what you and other veterans are experiencing firsthand. Let THEM live on what YOU get every month; let THEM get denied the benefits or care. Let them see what it's like. Chances are, they won't make it. Shame, such a rotten shame!

When are WE, as AMERICANS, going to rise up and shout: "ENOUGH IS ENOUGH?"

God bless you, dear Karla, and thank you for your service; you deserve MUCH better than what you are getting!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by larry linville
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
very good and to the point. I remember how we treated the Vietnam vets and I hope we take better care of the men and women who represent us now, regardless of how we feel about this war.

Larry

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
The anger that is welling inside me began at your first word and continued through the last and into my review because of the sadness of what you wrote. These people who fought so galantly for ALL of us deserve better. It's not like they woke up one morning with the thought of being maimed and having to rely on us for basic human care.

Enough,
Kathy

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Bitter gall! I wonder where the bill is that claims to have taken care of that problem and given vets more help? It gets headlined news, then is forgotten,and we never kn ow what came of it.It should be investigated! Thank you for your service Karla!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Why does no one give a damn?..

We have sadly become a vast nation of hardly anyone gives a damn about anything it seems these days, except themselves. And after having spent almost 30 years trying to help our vets, I know we haven't given a damn about them since way back in Viet Nam.

I'm just about to the point where I believe our nation is truly lost, and God Help Us All.


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