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Welcome To My Nightmare
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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I fight the darkening of the sky,
The lowering of clouds,
The rising of fear.
Sometimes, a basement's available.
Others - not on your life!
Tornado coming!

Can hear it roaring in the distance -
Don't see it, just hear it.
Like dreams of falling:
You know, when you hit the ground, you'll die?
That scares me the most:  will
I wake up in time?

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (2/21)

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 Reviews of "Welcome To My Nightmare"
Reviewed on February 23, 2008

"Welcome To My Nightmare" yes conjurs up fearful images of such storms as only you can Storm Spinna'...heeeheee.
I don't know but do believe most people survive tornadoes if you think about how many there are these days.

Keep on clicking and keep on writing, hope this review finds you in the best of spirits. God continue to bless you and the family Dear One.

Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on February 22, 2008
Keep your faith in God, almighty. He will care for you. Tornados are frightening even when you have a basement. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on February 22, 2008
Dramatic, emotion-filled write. Be safe and God bless. Rebecca

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on February 22, 2008
I understand the feeling of always keeping an eye on the sky, especially those of us who live in whats called tornado alley...
great writing Karla, stay safe!
love, Carole~

Reviewed on February 22, 2008
What a photo. Be safe. !

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2008
Great writing sweet lady,stay safe and well..Hugssssss

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 22, 2008
Hope you find that basement, though Rufuz and I would just fly away like Dorothy's house is a tornado came through here...ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2008
Don't know how you guys haddle staying there through them. Lady J

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 22, 2008
Nightmares truly come in many forms, and I hope pleasant dreams replace yours.

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on February 22, 2008
Under{standing} a tall & humbled placement _ In all .~. evolvole ~ Ted

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 22, 2008
If I could, I will be there to tuck your blankets and tell you that all is well with a whisper that will make the nightmares go away, even the storm ones...

Georg

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 22, 2008
Karla,

Yes, my friend it's the landing that does everyone in. If we were Olympians then sticking the landing would be a challenge but we're not and the best we can do is hope and pray. Just trying to add a little humor. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 22, 2008
Here, in Italy we have the occasional earth tremor. In Connecticut, where I'm from, incredible snow storms. My mom, whom I'm going to be visiting next week,lives in Florida and has to deal with hurricanes. No matter where you live, there's weather to contend with! Don't let the fear stop you from living Karla! But then again, your fear has helped you write some incredible poetry! And what a fantastic photo!

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 21, 2008
I know maybe it isn't meant to be symbolic, but... the first few lines definitely could be symbolic of so many different things.

We recently moved from the midwest and I must admit that I don't miss the scary weather.

Cryssa

Reviewed on February 21, 2008
Karla, if I could give you and Karen my basement I surely would. Do you see the basement you make yourself every day in your poems? Sure it is only symbolic, but is that not very very significant. Great work.

be well and happy,
Kathy

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 21, 2008
...again...nightmares are well penned...but not wished for in our dreams...
well done Karla...
John

Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on February 21, 2008
Come on out to visit me in California, dear Karla. They say we have a dozen earthquakes every night. Other experts say that some day California will just break off and float out into the Pacific.

To be candid, I haven't felt a tremor for fifteen years. I just sleep through the night dreaming of the violent shakings of yesteryear. But maybe I'm confused. Maybe I'm just remembering my younger days when even my bed would quake at the sight of stud like me. Memories of youth are often self-deceiving.

Still, I remember vividly my days in the mid-West and the roar of the approaching train in the sky. Tain't fun at all.

Thanks but no thanks, Karla. Keep your nightmares to yourself, please. I'm panicked at the sight of your words.

Richard



Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 21, 2008
Sometimes fear can inhibit us to the point we become emotionally crippled, then there is the cold reality of it all, well done...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on February 21, 2008
LOL at Susie's review below...NOT laughing at you, Susan, but the invitation to the Hurricane and Lightning Capital of the World....LOL Plus you get tornadoes and have mosquitoes the size of 747's...LOL SERIOUSLY, though, a vacation in Florida does sound nice! :)

And Karla, you pegged a terrifying peek into the world of the stormphobic's realm of neverending fear! Powerful write and illustration! Very well done, Storm; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :)

Watch Out! Svr wx season loomin'---just what you wanted to hear...NOT!! LOL

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on February 21, 2008
I can't imagine never being secure because of the weather. If you and your sis ever want to move...come on over to Florida. We have hurricanes but we know when they're coming.
Blessings and love,
Susan


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