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Waiting Game
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... The few, the proud, the disabled ...


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Lying on a hospital bed, covered
with sheets of pain and memories,
he remembers when he took the
oath of office, swearing to defend

the Nation against all enemies,
foreign and domestic.  He recalls
the exact moment when time came
to a halt, when he became one of

the few, the proud, the disabled.
He didn't know it at the time, but
the enemy was in his own backyard:
the purple heart given as a thank you

for his sacrifice won't replace the
legs he lost, won't bring his buddies
back, won't pay the bills or put food
on the table.  He's waiting for the VA

to make a decision on his appeal ...
last time, they said he wasn't disabled
enough.  That was before this latest
infection:  he's got nothing but time.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (2/27)

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 Reviews of "Waiting Game"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 29, 2008
So sad to read about those forgotten in times of need!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
Our country has a history of turning its back on those who willingly serve. Many left to wait with little hope.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
I can't believe the same politicians that send young men into war would not do all to be sure their injuries are compensated financially for the sake of their futures and families! Yet, it has been happening since at least the Vietnam years. In the end that's why you have to have organizations like AM-Vets! As I've said politicians make the wars - the young men pay for them!

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
A hard, hard thing to take-- heart-rending, really-- the things we ask these brave people to do for us, and then the cold shoulder we give them for doing their best-- doling out medals as if they were meals that would last a life time-- as if they were medicine that with just one dose, you'd be cured... sickening! --Charlie

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
Powerful message in the hard hitting piece Karla, excellent job!
love, Carole~

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
...infected minds of indecision...medal in time...while hearts turn blue...in the process.
well gone and well said Karla...
John

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
Games played, like these, always end up scattered on the floor with one sorry loser defending his stand on political bull crap, and the other just trying to pick up the pieces...maybe, to savor for nostalgia purposes...?... because, I'm more than positive he dares not play again, even if he could!
Your pen speaks volume, Karla
Love and Peace to you!
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
Your poem touches the mind and heart, especially of those of us who have friends or loved ones who are war-torn survivors--still trying to survive. For me, this is one of your best, Karla.

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
~decision-making for people with disabilities is the most inhumane activity our Government participates in to my mind~

each and every tier of disability decision-making is plagued with a concept that you are not disabled enough and it takes years to acquire the much needed benefits that make their best end-result with the most immediacy

with the types of explosives used in this latest and greatest war - according to the men in charge - the loss of limb or rattled brain is the hoped for results of our enemies

the Wounded Warrior program is devised to compensate but is only occasionally awarded to humanitarians and more often awarded to more money hungry contractors - i know i've written the responses

Karla keep the faith - and the perseverance - and penning the reality.

~D.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
Oh Karla this is so sad but so true, My husband was Military for 28 years and now he is with the Reserves and his job is making sure the Veterans etc. get everything they are entitle to without delay. Too many are tossed aside when they deserve the world on a golden plater. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
He's waiting for the VA
to make a decision on his appeal ...

And far too many of them, wait, and wait, and wait, these very sad days.

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
Karla...beautiful composition here...while I have seen you work with this message before, the construction with its delightful and well constructed quatrains is different for you...and you did good! Great flow, and rhythm.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
A War Veteran got his medal forwarded with a bill for handling and posting of $ 57.39, he returned the damn thing unpaid.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
Sad and touching write, Karla.

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
sad, sad, sad... thanks for being a voice for the armed forces, Karla!
Cryssa

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
a poignant write-things should not be this way-let your voice be heard!

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
Our government is full of greed, and unbelief. God will judge the unrighteous, and kick 'em out of office. This is so true. I've talked to a few military vets, and they say the same things written here. Thanks for sharing, Karla.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
A wake up poem! Good job.

Reviewed on February 27, 2008
Oooh, Karla, you're sure to raise some people's blood pressure (including MINE!!) with this heartbreaking slice of reality for far too many of our brave soldiers who gave all to defend our nation. Too many times the veterans are the ones who end up suffering needlessly while those who do the killing/shooting get off scott-free. Shame on our nation for treating our veterans like they were
expendable! Our veterans (past, current, and future) deserve nothing but the BEST! Very well penned; brava, Karla! This needs to be sent to be shouted from the rooftops: ENOUGH is ENOUGH!!

Let's give our veterans the treatment and respect they RIGHTFULLY deserve!!!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
You know...if I worked fcor the VA I'd be leading the way for our VETS to get top notch medical care immediately. That;s why I don't work there. They full of nepotism emploee realted job/careers. They need to be thoroughly investigated.
These people gave life and limbs while they push a pencil.It's all friggin crazy!
Love,
Susan


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