Needed: Monster Slayer (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on June 23, 2008

Maybe remembering that your parents are watching over and helping protect you would help...

Cryssa

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on June 22, 2008

That cloud is super ominous, though. Truth be told, I'd be chicken too... "How oft I would have gathered you like hen to chickens under my wings, but you would not..." (something like that, Karla)--somehow, I think you "would." --Charlie

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on June 22, 2008

awwww, poor baby! I will be your monster slayer...

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on June 22, 2008

I've been afraid in my life too. I think the tornadoes in the sky that we have here are a metaphor for your real fears. I've had some of the same issues. To every one a measure of faith is given, speak to it, yell Faith rise up! ;) As always you've woven a terrific piece my Storm Spinner, my friend.

Love, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on June 22, 2008

You'll find the way. Great poem about facing your fears. Bravo. Liz

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2008

Over the years you've left me giggling, crying, looking inward and a gamut of many emotions... this one? I'm breathless. It isn't just packed with visuals, well-drawn, poetic: it's damned fine poetry! katy xox

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 22, 2008

Karla, I see you running and scrared,, Do not Fear, Jesus is with you.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on June 22, 2008

YOU will have no fears from this vicious storm Karla, you are HERE to write them! and WRite them YOU do!
A Miracle from YOU to each of us, for what you bring - it is a lesson with each electrifying pen!
Write On!
Stay WEll! and Inspired!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Sweet Lady Shexooo

STay POSitive! With Gods' guiding hand and spirit! YOU will escape from it!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 22, 2008

But think Karla, how these storms, both "real and imagined" have helped you write such wonderful poetry!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 21, 2008

You've said it before, Creator is a very present help in time of danger,He will uphold you with His righteous right hand...
Excellent poem Karla!

ET

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on June 21, 2008

This really sounds frightening. But we can overcome our worst fears. Very good picture, impressive.

Axilea

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 21, 2008

Do like I and Rufuz do, crawl under the bed...e & r

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 21, 2008

Amen Karla the answer truly is Jesus, a great write, powerful imagery
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on June 21, 2008

You're going to outlive these storms, Karla, both real and otherwise,
but in the meantime you'll continue to write these great poems.
-gene.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 21, 2008

Clever imagery and word usage; very well written, Karla! I know a monster slayer: JESUS (as you and I found out today)! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twinklies, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 21, 2008

Very strong and childlike in it's out look and that is the way this one should be. Well done Karla.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Myrtle Poor (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2008

This show such deep feelings. Fear of anything is not a good. You did a good job on this write thanks for sharing.

Stay blessed,
Myrtle Poor

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on June 21, 2008

Karla, from my not too brilllian past, I did race a tornado across Kansas once, many years ago. I lost. Nice write. Cool picture.

Cheers,
Dan