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Watermelon Skies
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Image (c) 2006, Karla Dorman

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The sun rises in
w a t e r m e l o n skies,
seeded clouds fat and
bursting with juice --- a
delicious treat worth
awakening for.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman

 
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 Reviews of "Watermelon Skies"
Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2008
Nice imagery Karla! Well done!
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
Karla,
I love how you reach to the sky for inspiration! Clever poem. Hugs!
Sheila
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
This is a tasty, succulent, seed spitting metaphor. Great photo too. God bless. JMW
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
A ripe metaphor! Color is everything to a poet, Karla...the things we use to associate like things are abundant in nature if we pay attention...Excellent word usage.

Love,
Sage
Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
Oh my god, this is so good! Perfection. ~ Sara
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
Simply Lovely, the words and the photo!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
Great picture, beautiful poem!....M
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 12, 2008
Some of your writes such as this one Karla is simply delicious. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on July 12, 2008
Deliciously sweet and satisfying!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 12, 2008
Love the analogy, Karla. Nicely done! Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 12, 2008
Great write Karla; picture too.
Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on July 12, 2008

- - - proving, again, that our world offers beauty that renews itself over and over... just for us! This is good work... making my morning better. Thank you. - Bill
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
All that cool refreshing rain feeding all in dire need, so lovely....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
This was beautiful Karla, keep these coming
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
I had never thought of a juicy watermelon at dawn...
Unless I'm hungry! :-D

Axilea
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Delightful!
John
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
A divine write my friend, beautiful and juicy description, enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Beautifully penned, Karla and the pic is absolutely glorious ... hugs
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
What a wonderful description. A lovely poem.
Reviewed by Quanda Graves
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Karla???? Alll I can say is WOW!! What a refreshing, lite and amazing way to look at the sky. Love it!!!!!

Until...
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
....Refreshing poem,, what a delight Karla!! Love the photo too.
Love, Christine
Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
...wonderful images...become the imaginative wonder of your pen and photography...in this write.
very well done Karla...
John
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
I love reading your poem.The picture is absolutely breath-taking.Don't you just love a beautiful sunset?:-).I really like the title of your poem and the words in it.Very unique.take care of yourself

Edwin
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
What a beautiful image you've created here, Karla! I love the title.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Watermelon skies are alright as it don't spit that seeds down on me.

Georg
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Excellant write and love the symbology...well done.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
You and your poems are a wonder to behold, love Holly
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Ah...but I SURE hope that watermelon is seedless!!!
hee, hee...
Cryssa
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Yummy! A most delicious write, Karla; I'm now droolin' over here! LOL Very well penned/illustrated; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twinks, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Karla, that's what I like: an early morning poem that is
both beautiful and good for you. Thank you. -gene.
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Yummy!!! This is delicious and simply wonderful. your photos are captivating.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Ah, yes indeed . . . Now if we just had a taste of watermelon wine to go along with this . . . I think Tom T. is bring us some later . . .
Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
I don't think I've heard that term, "Watermelon Skies," before. Your poem and your picture have captured it for me. What a wonderful way to start the day! Eileen
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Karla, your poem is absolutely beautiful - loved it!
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
a beautiful offering
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
A delicious poem, and what a pic!
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Just watch those seeds, they can cause all sorts of problems...ed
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