... Telling them to go away does no good; they'll laugh in your face ....
Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman
"Don't Have To Chase ..."
... storms chase me, following me into
my own backyard, searching for the
entryway to the cellar of my fear,
hidden deep within. Telling them to
go away does no good; they'll laugh
in your face with moisture laden
breath and continue to beat at the
door. I stand on the other side,
pushing against the forces wanting
in. They are stronger; feet slipping;
can't hold on much longer. Eyes snap
open like shutters to greet the ... sun?
We had more storms than usual too this year here in Toronto Canada. One minute is bright and sunny, another minutes dark clouds gather and it pours and the wind just blows. You can't rely on the weather report anymore.
Your fear is well expressed in this one. Hope you two are safe. Will pray for you both!
Great lines in this one, Karla. And I love the twist ending. --Charlie
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2008
There is a thing about the "cellar of my fear" where all the bad things are contained inside where we may cultivate and celebrate them, much like fine olde wines. And outside is lovely. Love this one, Karla (and the pic, too).
It looked like storms were coming several times today, then at 5 p.m. the sun came out strong. I was glad nothing came of the storms. We had enough of them lately. Really enjoy your weather stories and stormy stories. Hang in there, don't let them frighten you.
Karla, I am grateful we don't live in the storm zone, we get our share but nothing like you, I would rather deal with the Earthquakes LOL, but where we are at thats not much of a problem either...
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2008
Nicely done, Karla - a sense of anticipation, surprise and ultimate relief emanates strongly from this piece.
You draw us in, let us feel the claws of the storm slashing its nails down the spine, only to discover it was only a DREAM?? Dang, this is good, Karla; VERY good! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twinkles, Karen Lynn. :D
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Georg
Your fear is well expressed in this one. Hope you two are safe. Will pray for you both!
Sandie May :(
Ted
Be always safe,
Karen
Janet xoxoxo
than the weather. -gene.
hugs
FEe
In Christs Love
Michelle~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twinkles, Karen Lynn. :D
Edwin