Hot Air Balloon (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 27, 2008

what an innovative thing you have done here Karla -- peace to you this day -- and may the air 'neath the balloon, keep your spirits buoyed up -- JMW

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 22, 2008

Karla, I love how you've done this! Excellent work!

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on October 21, 2008

You are so imaginative, Karla. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on October 21, 2008

This is a totally fantastic presentation.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

I've never been in one.
Don't blame ya
Yore friend
Ron
SMooooooooooooo0000000000Ch!

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Oh my GOD! Karla, this poem is soooo good. Visually and poetically, it is just perfect. ~ Sara

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Karla,

Fantastic write my friend . . . creatively perfect!

Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

very creative you are ms Karla! such fun
reading you!I love all flight;-)

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

One of the reasons why I will NEVER fly, great write....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

I love the way you constructed this poem. And being helpless inbetween 2 forces is scary. Great. Liz

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Karla, well done. Are you sure you would not like to take your
balloon around the world in 80 days? Or at least to Dallas? -gene.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

I don't blame you! Great little poem and form Karla.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Enjoye this kool write Karla

I too fear height, I like it close to the ground

If God wanted me flying, he would have giving me wings

Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Life is like that much of the time; inbetween. In the balloon you know you gotta come down sometime; but in life one could stay in that inbetween or "purgatory" state indefinitely.

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Cute write. Haven't been up in one myself and haven't decided if I want to. Love to see them floating by, though. Rebecca

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

You'll never catch me in one of those. You're brave, girl!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

lol - I thought you served in the Air Force?? Great write. Cool format.
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

A good write and loved the format lol,
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Karla,

That must have been a fascinating experience. Very clever the way you
draw the poem.

Mary

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

You not only have a gifted talent in writes but in design as well. Beautiful write Karla, would love to try one sometime. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

That remainds me of the first parachute jump from five thousand feet from a rackety-rack two motor DC-3 by day, then there were all those jumps by night! have you jumped anywhere in pitch dark? gimme a balloon any day! well, not any more, gimme a parachute any day...or night.

Georg

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

lol Very good Karla. Hope you had fun and enjoyed the ride.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

This is a NEAT write, Karla, both in verse and form. WOW!! Terrific; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

"Put. It. BACK". LOL

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

This is a good poem,I used to went up on a balloon ride and it was an amazing experience.I went on it last summer.At first I was a little bit nervous,but once I was up in the air and see views of the city skyline and Central Park,it was priceless.The balloon didn't have any hot air.It was made out of heilum.I enjoy the ride.I'm sure you enjoy it even though you was scared which is understandable.Take good care of yourself

Edwin

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

I like this!