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Rules, You Know
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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The Pentagon refused to give returning Iraqi and Afghanistan war Veterans that suffer from PTSD Purple Hearts for their mental injuries. SHAME.

... Sorry, though, no Purple Heart ....

Image, (c) 2009, Karla Dorman


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Battle scarred, frozen in body
and in mind.  Horrors you saw
unfold before the eyes, preying
on terror-filled dreams and in
sudden noises that electrify the
nerves with a surge of panic -

incoming !!  Sorry, though, no
Purple Heart, because your
injury didn't occur on a field of
honor or didn't leave blood or
limb behind:  rules, you know.
Sanity not considered disability. 

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (1/8)


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 Reviews of "Rules, You Know"
Reviewed by Bernadette Wozniak
Reviewed on January 13, 2009
This poem effects me very much, like it should, but the photo accomplicing it makes the feeling being expressed more than it is. Not only through my mind and my interpretation but through a visual. Veryyyyy nice. :]

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 11, 2009
another exceptional write Karla that is complimented by a fantastic photo -- may peace,love and joy be always with you -- JMW

Reviewed on January 9, 2009
Karla~!

PROFOUNDLY PERFECT!!


LOve and Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 9, 2009
Excellent Karla...
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on January 9, 2009
FANTASTIC acknowlegement of what they did give for their country, no metal is good enough for them to leave their souls so exposed. WEll done Karla, Love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 9, 2009
Excellent Karla, you do expose well!

Eileen

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 9, 2009
And Georg knows. Wounded three seriously times (one by an inch of his life) he got a Purple Heart after a high brass got pissed off when they ignored him on his thir tour.
The Purple Heart should be used as a recognition to the thousands that where wounded for life, physically or mentally for their unselfish service to the country.
It isn't in the rules, it is a result of envy from those sitting behind a office desk dreaming new ways to screw those that fought when daddy pull strings so them could spit on the Nam's heros.


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 9, 2009
Karla...you've told it like it is...no punches pulled. Excellent.

Reviewed on January 9, 2009
Sad indeed. this poem is strong and hope it will land on a pentagon tray, one day tó change the minds of those who run the state machinery and make policy for the nation. Well done dear Karla. Your brother and friend abdi-noor

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 9, 2009
It is sad that we can not only send young people into zones of occupation without the tools and resources needed to do the job but then when they come back broken in either mind or body...refuse to recognize what war has done to them. Well said Karla.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2009
Karen said it: "let's kick their a**es out of office and get those who know the needs of the people in office!!" -- Karen has the only real solution.

Here's a little story for you. There is nothing new or unknown about PTSD (except for its name). My step-grandfather fought through WWI and WWII, serving on everything from the early S-Boat subs to the 4-stack destroyers. He had several ships sunk out from underneath him by kamakazis. In the 1950s, sitting at our kitchen table, he would cringe if a piper cub flew over our house. He would constantly flash back to horrible war experiences. He never lost a limb but part of his mind was destroyed. They called it "Shell Shock" in those days, and they never offered him a Purple Heart, or anything, for that matter. Now it is called PTSD and our government continues to ignore it as a wound. Yes, Karen has it exactly right on. Georg should weigh in on this one -- he knows!!!

Ted

Reviewed on January 8, 2009
These people are insane. In many ways are Iraqi and Afghanistan vets are being treated no differently than those that came out of Vietnam. When will our goverment, get its head screwed on straight.
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 8, 2009
And I still have no sanity from the last war to save U.S. all from communist tyranny, in a land & "police action" we never won...but ya gotta live on...so we cope as best we can...ed

Reviewed on January 8, 2009
They're full of bulls***, that's all I have to say on that! It's ludicrous!! Let's write our congressmen and women; better yet, let's kick their a**es out of office and get those who know the needs of the people in office!! Tragic, heartbreaking write! Very well penned frustration; I hear ya!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 8, 2009
I get your drift on this one Karla. And much too true. Thanks for the reminder and God bless.


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