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P.T.S.D.
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... just another day of living with Post Traumatic STORM Disorder --

Image and video (c) 2009, Karla Dorman


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... nerves firing off one by one until
they all overamp:  overloaded by
fear until the body shuts down
from sheer exhaustion.  Desperately
wanting to confront the beast on its
own turf, but unable to get past the

memories of six tornadoes and a
roof gone over the years that have
left an indelible footprint on the
psyche.  Screaming arguments with
loved ones who don't understand
the terror that comes in nightmare

and each storm that may or may not
come -- it's in the forecast.  Where
to go, where to hide?!?  Underground
shelters not an option.  Teeny tiny
claustrophobic sized half baths don't
count.  Supercells with grapefruit

hail and twisters approaching from
the northwest galvanize feet to
action -- get a ride to the local
hospital to wait out the weather --
it's just another day of living with
Post Traumatic STORM Disorder --

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (6/15)

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 Reviews of "P.T.S.D."
Reviewed on June 18, 2009
Powerful write Karla, keep these coming, I miss you, but I promises to catch up as soon as I am back online at home
In Christs love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on June 17, 2009
In some ways this could aptly also stand for PRE traumatic storm disorder. :~)... That constant looming fear before a storm...
Sorry that storms plague you so.

Love and hugs,
Cryssa

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2009
Hi Karla, a very intense write...you are in my prayers, love Holly

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 16, 2009
this must be so difficult-i hope you can find a solution or at best, some peace

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 16, 2009
I am beginning to know what you are trying to convy
About storms, today we had one of our severe storms
with tormnado warnings, saw some really ugly clouds
and pray they continue on there way and not sending
any twister downward
the rain started, of which I sit by enjoying the rhythm
of the rain drops against my window pane, while listening to the rolling thounder at a distance
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed on June 16, 2009
Been through a few of these. We always went to the local school for shelter, in Michigan.

Reviewed on June 16, 2009
I do feel for you Karla, but helpless to help you
Keep your head down
Sending clear sky's your way { I hope }
Great write
The Buzzard

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 16, 2009
Dear 1/2 Twin, for your information, since 1945 has been recommended the building and use of deep in the ground bunkers that will keep at bay atom-blast as well as silly hurricane storms! Something to think about?
Hope you have one, so...use it!

Georg


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 16, 2009
Karla, I can feel the fear in this. You are in my prayers.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on June 15, 2009
Don't know how you do it, Karla. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on June 15, 2009
To me, Karla, this is one of the best of your recent poems.
I sense the anger, the fear, and the need to escape more
trauma from those Texas storms. All I can do from the Jersey
shore is hope for your safety and wish you peace of mind.
With love of course, gene.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 15, 2009
a friend's sister lost two houses in Texas due to tornadoes ... i can empathize with your feelings in this powerful poem ...

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on June 15, 2009
It's a very personal and unique vision of trauma, weather, insecurity that you share here. I like what you chose to tell in this piece of writing, and although you share some facts, the particular point of view is what makes them poetic.

Axilea

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on June 15, 2009
Karla, that must be awful! I hope the weather gets better soon.Wonderful written.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 15, 2009
Karla,
The power and honesty in this match any storm. You are always in my thoughts and I know you will ride it out, you will win, of course you will.
John

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 15, 2009
Praying that the storms will subside my friend and for your safety...wishing you well.
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 15, 2009
Although I love storms I must say the severity and frequency of the storms you seem to get would defiantely wear the nerves thin.

fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 15, 2009
I agree with Bear...I hope and pray you find the solution ,because weather is a problem that isn't going away. You either face it or fear it! Keep praying karla...I pray with you...

Love,
ET

Reviewed on June 15, 2009
Hi Karla, You write from a StormSpinner's heart! It's in the forecast... I love how you fit that line in there... excellent write, my friend... stay strong, 'cuz forecasts aren't always accurate... :)

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on June 15, 2009
I can't imagine having to ride out as many storms as you have. Keep your faith and stay strong.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 15, 2009
I wish I could help you move, but I am stuck where I am too, but with not as many stressful problems as you...I'll keep thinking bout you all...Ed

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 15, 2009
Understandable, my friend. A great write too. Hang in there, Karla.

Reviewed on June 15, 2009
Sorry about the other day, but I need to understand where you are coming from. Maybe if it happens to me (and I pray it DOESN'T), maybe only then will I truly see what you heard, experienced first hand. Excellent capture of fear gone wild! Well done, Karla; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your (stormphobic) twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 15, 2009
Clever poem, but I know the stress must be unbearable...

Lin


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