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Organized Chaos
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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No wonder I don't enjoy going to church anymore ...

Lori Moore's EXCELLENT poem, 'This is That,' inspired these lines - thank you.

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The only ones getting rich
off prosperity teachings
are those that preach it:
sow into the Kingdom
with a thousand dollar
donation, I receive back
a thousand fold, praise
Jesus.  Not my fault you
lack the faith to receive.
Need a job, a new car,
a house?  Send me your
poor and I'll watch the
blessings pour in:  sorry
you can't afford to pay
bills or keep a roof over
your head.  If you'll
order my latest teaching,
credit card only, you will
know the way to my
happiness ... they don't
practice what they preach.
if money the root of evil,
why do they bow down
and worship it so much?

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (8/3)

 


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 Reviews of "Organized Chaos"
Reviewed on August 10, 2009
Hi Karla. Why? Because they are hypocrites. Perhaps a picture of God on our dollar bills? Instead of presidents? Might make us think? Karla, this picture: it is so great and eerie. It looks like a fetus in the womb behind the light. Was that intentional? Out of the mouths of babes comes the light, come the emperor's new clothes. We grow older not necessarily wiser. Practice what we preach? Who needs preachers? Perhaps if we all just practiced. Practice may not always make perfect, but it does help, doesn't it? Thank you for the poem and the fabulous photograph.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
that's telling them Karla -- the hypocrites and thieves that use religion to rob -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
A great one, Karla, acute as always. You've got your finger right on the sore spot of "organized," that's for certain. Take care! (())

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
We don't need church to talk to God. Church is only there to make you feel as though you belong to the bigger picture, if that's what you need. Although, it's a great place to hear inspiring words. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 5, 2009
No wonder I don't enjoy going to church anymore ...

Neither do I; I do my praying these days in the great outdoors - but even the wonders of nature are vanishing far too fast, now.

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
I hear you Karla, kinda makes you wonder about things doesn't it...that's what we're to do, question what is real and what is not, who is fake and who really cares...A Necessary Write, blessings, Holly

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Strong, passionate write, Karla! There are many who would do anything for a dollar, but we have to remember there are those who would take their last dollar to give to someone else. I always prefer to think there are more of the latter. Many hugs, Elizabeth :)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
... I'm in the "me, too" brigade as regards much of churchianity, Karla... But I also know that poor old God is often done a great disservice by those who claim to be His representatives, so, like the choir below me, I often prefer to pow-wow one to one, rather than be distracted by the pious whitewash that only badly disguises the lack of real heart to faith and fellowship. Still, I try not to throw the baby out with the bathwater... some churches are still out there doing the stuff that's meant to be being done, but I very much doubt that even they get it all right all of the time... xx Necessary write done well. xx

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
I too empathized with Lori's write and now this eye catching one of yours...there are too many false churche's out there with spires reaching to the skies who would be better off looking for salvation outside their doors on the street...

fee

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
A lot to ponder in this offering, Karla...well done
peace, Carole~

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
If Christianity is ever going to succeed it needs to go back to the basics; feed the hungry, offer water to the thirsty and shelter to the lost, then we will not need to hear about how prosperity is the roadway to salvation.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed on August 4, 2009
So thought provoking Karla

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
you hit a big nail on the head, well done.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
What was Janet Joplin singing about? "Oh Lord buy me a Mercedes Benz"
If you are going to church, any church...left your wallet at home!

Georg


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
There's God....religion....and the men who corrupt...so many aren't able to separate the three. Excellent write, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
There is a reason why there are two laws, one of man made rules and another which is God's laws. Nice to read you again. We've been busy and still are as the puppies are very ill, been at the animal hospital for the past few days and going back tomorrow.

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 3, 2009
me too, Karla, me too!

Reviewed on August 3, 2009
Karla the church I attend is very laid back and not into the prosperity teachings, but I do understand what you are saying many are like that, still we can not judge all churches by the way some act, there are always exceptions great poem
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on August 3, 2009
Easy there, it's the love of money that's the root. Which of course still plays directly to your point and to Lori's. Great write. Patrick

Reviewed by Micki Peluso
Reviewed on August 3, 2009
Karla, sad to say but even with religious groups, not all, but many, in the final result, it's all about money. It has always been so --back to when Jesus tore apart the temple for making money in the a sacred place. As for me, I take what I need from my church and try to ignore the rest. What you wrote needed to be said!!

Micki Peluso

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 3, 2009
I thought I was bad. Lol... We better never write one of these together or someone might try to deny us our southern roots. Having read your work for several years, I'm sure your faith is soundly placed. Enjoyed the write.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 3, 2009
Tell it like it is, Karla. Excellent write my friend. God bless.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 3, 2009
Karla,
A great voice here, puttin' it out there, sayin' what has to be said.
Yes!

John

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on August 3, 2009
It's because of this "organized chaos" why I am not allowed to appear on AD's front page any longer. Burn the witch! Well, Day of Reckoning came and went and I made it to the top anyway. What's the price of gold membership without the bio photo on the front page. WTF, who cares. I have been banned for over two years so "religion" could step in and take it from a diverse artist who paid for Karen Lynn's membership for about six months two years ago...I was happy to do it. Organized Chaos speaks its voice. Blessed Be.

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on August 3, 2009
Praise the Lawd! -gene.

Reviewed on August 3, 2009
Amen, Sister! Preach it!

Reviewed on August 3, 2009
I think you are applying this to the TV shouters...and I agree with you on this...I never watch 'em! Don't lose your faith even if you can't find it in some preachers; you know where your heart belongs.
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed on August 3, 2009
Not all churches are like this, Karla. It's just that some have ruined it for those who are only trying to spread the Word or do good for others. I wasn't going to comment on this, but I felt I had to. I only hope you can see the good people are doing for God's service; there are many good people out there who only want to spread the love of Christ. No, they don't need to be preaching prosperty; that's wrong. How about accepting people of ALL social classes and helping those who are in most need instead of giving themselves gold chairs or fancy clothes? That's not serving God, only themselves! Thought provoking write!

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on August 3, 2009
Karla, I am so sorry you have seemed to have met some preachers like that. But I think there are many who have a deep and wonderful faith also, and practice as much as they can what they preach.I hope it doesn't hurt your faith.

With Love,
Cindy


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