Thirst (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 19, 2010

Double edged word sword here m8...I hate it when it threatens to rain and dosent..and the same goes for...
Brillo Karz xoxxox Chezza

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on May 2, 2010

Karla, how many empty dreams have I dreamed? -- to suckle from an empty breast of expectations and desires is to experience life's realities, disappointments -- you expressed this so poignantly my dear friend -- may peace and love be always with you -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on April 27, 2010

this poem attacks the heart with pain for the innocent

Reviewed by Tom poesyco.th@gmail.com

Reviewed on April 24, 2010

KARLA - WOW, KIDDO - WOW!

THIRSTY? maybe it is time to go BRA-LESS?

JIGGLE-JIGGLE ... er, ah, um - I mean ... GIGGLE-GIGGLE !!! TK.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on April 24, 2010

An expertly crafted image of sad, Karla. You must get sick of me saying so, but I'm constantly amazed by your original descriptions relating to the sky and weather. Enjoyed!
Sheila

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on April 22, 2010

Children suckling at empty breasts has a lot of connotations--all of which I think you cleverly mean. Famines and deserts of all kinds, no. Be watchful. Count your blessings, and that cup will soon run over. --Charlie

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 22, 2010

Very strong visuals in this splendid poem, Karla...glade you and your sister are both back!
peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 22, 2010

"...the clouds sag in the bra of sky..." those skies need silicon! (LOL)

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 21, 2010

this is truly good writing! really good!

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on April 21, 2010

Oh yes, Karla, power and sensitivity in one! This is very fine indeed.

John

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 21, 2010

Karla, this is absolutely AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! You are a genius to poetry!!!!!!! I'm so glad you are back!!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 21, 2010

Powerful, Karla, and uniquely inspired. You have said much with such strong images and in so few lines. Very well conceived and crafted. Good to see you posting again! :)) xx

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on April 21, 2010

I loved this one Karla, excellent thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on April 21, 2010

A cup full of metaphor, Karla! Be well you and Karen Lynn...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on April 21, 2010

Wow Karla, this is beautiful, excellent write.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe

Reviewed on April 21, 2010

Well written. I like it a lot.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 21, 2010

Good to see you both, apparently the library is still open, thankfully...ed

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 21, 2010

"the clouds sag in the
bra of sky, heavy
with milk".

Excellent metaphor, Karla, and a excellent write! Well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 21, 2010

Well done, Karla.

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed on April 21, 2010

Yeah! I like it.
Dayvid

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2010

Your poetry is really good Karla. This is fantastic!!! Welcome back!

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan

Reviewed on April 21, 2010

A beautifully penned, and poignant, piece. Rebecca