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Heaven's Bear (For Dreamweaver's Challenge)
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Look--up there in the sky--
Follow my finger--there!
I can't believe my eyes--
Look...it's God's little bear!

I remember that bear!
I was around your age--
I felt nobody cared--
filled with sadness and rage--

See, my parents had died,
Left to fend on my own;
Many sad tears I'd cried,
Felt lost and all alone--

Then one day, there he was,
A cloud-bear looked at me!
It said, "My name is Fuzz,
" 'Sposed to make you happy."

" 'Sposed to be on the ground,"
At the cloud-bear I stared!
" 'Pshaw!" came a tiny sound,
"God made me Heaven's bear.

"Y'see, when kids are sad,
The pain's too much to bear,
And if they're very mad,
Or when they're feelin' scared--

"God put me here, for them,
An answer to their prayers!
Just look up...and that's when
They'll see me...Heaven's bear!"

Never forgot that bear
And what he did for me
Let's take his picture--there!
We need him, there he'll be!
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in response to dreamweaver's challenge.
hope you like this...(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)

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 Reviews of "Heaven's Bear (For Dreamweaver's Challenge)"
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2002
You sure did do "GREAT" as Karen said! Enjoyed this...

Reviewed on November 18, 2002
Wonderful response, I responded to Dreamweavers challenge as well, but no where near as good as you and Karen did. Keep it up.
YSIC
~Michelle~
Hugz

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on November 18, 2002
Great write Karla, Well done!
Jack

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2002
A beautiful take on the picture......Just perfect. Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on November 18, 2002
Sadly sweet. Nice response.

Reviewed by shannon Smith (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2002
great job!!

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2002
Hey you... Thank so much for taking the challenge. (smile) You did great!!!!

Reviewed on November 18, 2002
you did GREAT, karla!! nice answer to dreamweaver's challenge; she'll be tickled to see so many responses! love, your twin, karen lynn. ((((HUGS)))) :)


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