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Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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unravelling
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what is wrong with the world today
it's coming apart as i speak
the building's not supposed to sway
around me i hear metal shriek--

what is that sound get out get out
we're supposed to evacuate
everyone around starts to shout
we're on floor number eighty-eight!--

in town for a business meeting
i do not know my way around
the air feels like it is heating
i sure wish i was on the ground--

there is no time to grab our things
we've gotta leave we've gotta go
fear and panic inside me clings
i'm scared of the dark don't you know--

slowly slowly we go down stairs
i want to stop and take a rest
no keep going you're almost there
why won't you listen i protest--

seventy sixty fifty-nine
damn we'll never get out of here
think i've used up my last life line
what i wouldn't give for a beer--

some firemen come up the stairs
they encourage us on our way
it's not too much more don't be scared
you'll make it you will be okay--

floors forty thirty how much more
never walked this much in my LIFE
my muscles scream they're stiff and sore
will i live will i see my wife--

my life passes before my eyes
there's some things i've done i regret
ask forgiveness and say goodbye
God, my family don't forget--

twenties in the teens almost there
what is that rumbling noise i hear
oh God save me please hear my prayer
then all memory is wiped clear--


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 Reviews of "unravelling"
Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on February 22, 2003
Very powerfully written!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
the is no such thing as security in an unsecure world...

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
Very powerful, Karla. Excellent poem.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
Karla,
another one from the heart
Peg

Reviewed on February 5, 2003
This is powerful, may God Bless you in your writings!
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed on February 5, 2003
A very powerful write Karla... the images are incredible!

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
Powerful images that fill the mind with feelings of terror for those who lived this nightmare

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
It seems so senseless, all the chaos. You have to question it! Powerful!

Reviewed by Little Miss...
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
Karla..
This must have been hell on earth for those poor people in this situation...
Excellant!
Love Jilly x

Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
It is,indeed, unravelling, and I personally don't think it's part of any godly plan. I read CNN world news each day, as well as foreign papers... the weave is coming undone. I believe that the common people are the only hope - some of the "power-players" with control of the means for earth's destruction seem only to think of that as a means to an end. I fear it will mean the end to all - all people, all life-forms. I truly hope not. I can only do what I personally can to sway them from destruction. The creation requires constructive care.

Reviewed by g g (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
I totally agree how powerful
this is excellent
huggs
Lady G

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
This is so powerful, Karla

Reviewed on February 5, 2003
intense, powerful write! *i shall never forget!* >tears < :( love, your twin, karen lynn. ((((HUGS))))


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