There's a good chance I may not survive,
I may not get out of this alive,
I leave you this note to let you know,
I love you...I love you...I love you so,
Darkness and smoke is all around me,
But in my mind, it's your face I see,
Forgive me the times I made you sad,
Remember the times I made you glad,
There were times when I hurt you down deep,
Those were the times I felt like a creep,
You stood beside me, through thick and thin,
Your love was pure, it was genuine,
There's a good chance I may not survive,
I may not get out of this alive,
I leave you this note to let you know,
I love you...I love you...I love you so,
We were from different sides of the tracks,
You were a rich girl, me, just a hack,
You saw something in me, deep inside,
You released my soul, filled me with pride,
My parents said it wouldn't work out,
And there were times that I had my doubts,
There were times when we nearly divorced,
The stormy weather would run its course,
There's a good chance I may not survive,
I may not get out of this alive,
I leave you this note to let you know,
I love you...I love you...I love you so,
You believe we've been married this long?
Ten years now...my parents were wrong,
We've been together for a long time,
I do not want to leave you behind,
I know the times ahead may get rough,
I never said, "I love you" enough,
Thank you for the love you've given me,
This is my way of apology,
There's a good chance I may not survive,
I may not get out of this alive,
I leave you this note to let you know,
I love you...I love you...I love you so,
The sky is falling, my time is near,
If I don't make it...dry my wife's tears,
Lord, please tell her that I love her still,
I'll always love her and always will,
There's a good chance I may not survive,
I may not get out of this alive,
I leave you this note to let you know,
I love you...I love you...I love you so.
Karla this is really something...so many emotions...well done!
Reviewed by Morchuis
Reviewed on March 1, 2003
Hi Karla,
Benjie gave this one the thumbs down,
Says he would rather have Kitty Kat any day.
Can you see what you can do about it, my life will be misery, till she comes back on.--Morchuis
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2003
Yes Karla, it is a very sweet and sad poem. Loving someone so much and worrying about not being there for them.
Brilliant. Bill Murray hugggggggs!
This is so good, girl.
~E
This Is Good, Better,Excelent!
TRASK
I miss kitty kat too
Benjie gave this one the thumbs down,
Says he would rather have Kitty Kat any day.
Can you see what you can do about it, my life will be misery, till she comes back on.--Morchuis
Brilliant. Bill Murray hugggggggs!
This is a masterpiece and should be framed.
Sandie Angel :o)
Sandy
Amor