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i don't think i'm in kansas anymore
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the c-130 transport plane
comes in for a landing
comin' in hard and fast
that's so we don't get
shot out of the sky
i don't think i'm in kansas anymore

we land into heat and
humidity so intense
it presses down on you
snatches the breath
right out of your lungs
i don't think i'm in kansas anymore

i'm here for one year
365 days
a lifetime
i hope i make it through
there's a chance i won't
i don't think i'm in kansas anymore

assigned my unit
attatched to the 9th marines
navy combat medic
to the walking dead
this is gonna be a long year
i don't think i'm in kansas anymore

writing home to loved ones
between moments of terror
there's time to relax
those times are so few
i let them know that i'm fine
but i don't think i'm in kansas anymore

every day more of my buddies
are being picked off
one by one one by one
i hold their hands
and watch them die
i don't think i'm in kansas anymore

mom dad i'm in the hospital
i'm comin' home
wounded by hostile fire
paralyzed from the waist down
but i'm alive
i think i'm comin' home to kansas...soon


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 Reviews of "i don't think i'm in kansas anymore"
Reviewed by John Hutchinson
Reviewed on April 14, 2003
Powerful!!!

Reviewed on April 13, 2003
touching write, karla! well done! love, your biggest fan and supporter, your twin, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) god bless you always, karla! :)

Reviewed by Audrey Snead (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
This was beautiful, and touching :) Brought tears to my eyes. But then, I'm a sentimental fool anyway- Thank the Lord :):) God bless you :)

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
I'm with Elizabeth on this one. This touches home.

Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
Wow, this is good.
- J -

Reviewed by J. Murphy
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
Very touching. J.

Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Oh, This was so powerful and moving, How very well written, you write so well, just takes us there with you,

Excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
this took my breathe away. so simple and well stated.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Karla this is a finely written piece very good, your stint in the service must be a big help;-)

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Intresting Karla...!!!

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
{{{{{{{{{ Karla }}}}}}}}}

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
damn...it is difficult for me to even read this...given the current state of affairs it is sadly a story that will repeat itself...**Mari**

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Ditto, Karla. Excellent writing.
Love Chrissie x

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Karla, you are really able to describe these situations with haunting clarity. Bravo on fine work.


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