what is it
that's so important
that i have to share it
what is it
that's inside my heart
that i have to write it
what is it
that makes me crazy
i'll explode
if i don't
let
it
out
what is it
that makes me write the way i do
what is it
that wakes me up at night
what is it
that suddenly comes to mind
what is it
that makes me cry
what is it
that makes me mad
what is it
that makes me laugh
what is it
that makes me pause in wonder
what is it
it's my heart
the inner me
that was hidden for so long
yearning to break free
released
one
dark
september
day
and i am blessed
and priviledged to share it
with you...my poetry.
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(((HUGS))) and thank you to each and
every one who has stopped by...to
read my works...and to those that
have posted a review...good or bad
...your honesty, helpful critique,
comments, prayers, friendship, and
support have meant so much.
thank you for sharing your hearts
...your inner you...your words...
with me. i have been blessed be-
yond measure.
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
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Reviews of "what is it (my 400th poem)"
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
400? Wow! I'm not sure what "it" is, but I'm certainly glad for it! You go, girl!
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
I hope you had a lovely Easter. I am sorry I am not being as supportive as I should be. In fact it may be some time before you may hear from me. Hopefully one day I may return to AD. At the moment I am still searching for peace and quiet so essential to writing. Your friend Victor
Hi,
We are all privaledged to have you as a writer and a friend as well. We are blessed beyond measure as well :D Have a great day!
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
Karla, congratulations. I wish I had read all 400 of them! But I guess I would be reading for a long time. And rereading also cuase my brain dosn't always work ok.
You are a bright star at Ad. I love you and many other feel the same way I do. God bless you dear and a very happy Easter. Bill HHHHHHHHHHHuuuuuuuuuggggggggggggggs!!!
And we want to thank you Karla, for letting us share your poems that allow us to laugh, cry and enjoy your creativity! I'm glad that you are a member of Authors's Den!
very well done Karla.....you better hurry I am catching up on you.......only 74 to go to play catchers with you lol.....enjoyed this one veryyyyy much!!
Love
Tinka
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2003
400 many read, how many do you write in bed,
Well done, and thanks for your inner insight..
(((((KARLA))))) congrats, karla, on a wonderful acheivement! now, if you can only get published; the world NEEDS to discover your marvelous talents! if i could, i'd publish you myself, but i don't know how... :( outstanding write; may you bless us with 400 more! :)
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2003
I'm glad to add the first review to your 400th poem. Congrats on that poem, and thanks for blessing us all with the first 399. {{{{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}}
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Robert Burns' first daughter was Elizabeth. Her story and the five descendants Scottish lives are recorded here with the Bard's message today as ever in need. Al Quida listen: Then let us pray that come it may, As come it will for a' that. That Sense
This book has been eight years in the making. It is mostly a jumble of thoughts written down in old spiral notebooks and hidden in the bottom drawer underneath various manuals for software packages and hardware long since turned obsolete.
We are all privaledged to have you as a writer and a friend as well. We are blessed beyond measure as well :D Have a great day!
You are a bright star at Ad. I love you and many other feel the same way I do. God bless you dear and a very happy Easter. Bill HHHHHHHHHHHuuuuuuuuuggggggggggggggs!!!
Congrats on 4 centuries :)
Reindeer
Love
Tinka
Well done, and thanks for your inner insight..
Sandie Angel :o)