utter confusion (some silliness) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by christine phillips (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2003

Again...gosh, you are so clever. This is such a cute poem. I love your unique style. I am so curious as to whom your literary influences are. ((Hugs)) All my best, Christine

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Don't you envy them?
No a worry in the world -

The dogs and the cats
That's what I mean to say.

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Mark Carroll

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Cute.

I like that feel all the time

waitaminute

feel like that in all my Ryhme

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

lotsalaughsnthisonewaitaminnit;-)

Reviewed by Netta Jack (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

LOL. And a great sense of humor too. You must be the whole package.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

4-26-03

You're Only Confused Whence You Let Yourself Be Confused !

TRASK

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Cute...

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

waitaminnit this has me laughing
A fly in my butter.......

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Okay what have you been drinking? Can I have some? Fun write!

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Loved it !

Reviewed by Lynn Barry

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

waitaminnit...I love it....overhearing young artsy type kids...I love this....(you and your sis growing up????)

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Karla this was great, lighthearted and fun!
((((HUGS))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

that felt very wonderland-ish...lol! great fun, and skillfully done! :)

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Dear Karla, Keep writing i love your sense of humor.
Love to You Karla, Karen, and your Dad.

yf
tony

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Karla this was good...no no...this was excellent...wait a minute...oh you have got me confused now...Hahahah....good humor....Floria

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Karla I give you a 10/10 because of creativity. I don't think you wrote this for a rating anyway. I feel you were just expressing. I really love it. Kind made me laugh. I also feel that when you write for a good rating, you'll step up to bat. In the meantime keep being true to you expressism.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

HA! silly nonsense, but a whimsical, humoresque write! i love the part about the flower smelled the bee and the bee smelled like a rose! HA! funny gem of a write; enjoyed this bit of tomfoolery here! thanks for my >grins < of the day; needed 'em! well done write, karla! love, your twin, karen lynn. (((((((((HUGS)))))))))) :)