keepin it in (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2003

Never again keep it in, but share with all. {{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

YOU are a Magnificent Luminous Being...you need NOT be a victim in ANY circumstance...be YOU!!...allow your God-given authority to blaze through...as the commercial says.." Just DO it!"
Love,
Vesna

Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Let them be, my friend. You are you, you're much too good to let them bug and hurt you. We'll lift you up in our prayers - He'll help you get over it. Love ya!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Great write and you got a lot of good advice :-)

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

I agree with everyone below me....:)

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Great advice from your twin and the others...
I'm sorry, too, that you're having a terrible time right now. Nobody has the right to make anyone feel like this. When I feel particularly vulnerable to other's rejection or judgment, I try to remember Eleanor Roosevelt's quotation--"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." DON'T let 'em do it to you, dear lady!! Like Carolyn said, "You stay strong..."

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Nice write Karla!

Jack

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

AhTeHey! Karla! Tiredness comes when your not at peace. Keeping the peace at your cost is not peace. You are never a wimp for saying or writing how you feel. You stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Hi Karla, I am sorry you feel so down, but I must agree with the others, perhaps if you write it down, even if it is just for yourself, it may help to feel better, You are such a wonderful person, it is sad that someone has made you feel this way,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Steve Ralph

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

yes it is painful isnt it.. always trying not to lose it, just in case you say or do something you can't take back later..
the trouble is then it just keeps building up inside untill you lose control of it and things are even worse,,
very good poem i wish you well
steve.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

write about your feelings instead of saying something to somebody; that way, you can save yourself the heartache or pain, and you don't have to worry about people getting mad at you for saying the wrong thing! LOL but at times, it IS best to let it out, even if it means hurting somebody you care about, but at least you feel better in the long run! you know i will always be there for you, even when you say the meanest thing you can possibly think of (but then, don't i do the same to you? i am guilty of that, too!)! i love you, and i always will; you know that! heartwrenching and emotive write; well done, sweetie! (((HGUS))) and love, your twin, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

What you need is a massage!...lol
Wonderfully written, Karla!

tony:)