this ride called life (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on July 16, 2003

nice write, but I do feel a little light-headed

Reviewed by Sarah Tagert

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

Most of the time I just want off the ride, I don't like the ups and downs

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

7-15-03

You as I Will Survive It, Just Do Not Quit!

TRASK

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

Unique .. Loved the ride.. I think I lost my stomach on the second down. Excellent

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

Karla, lately I've been screaming LET ME OFF THIS DAMN RIDE!!!! But, life does go on, and hopefully will get easier, or me get smarter or tougher, or... whatever, huh? smiles..... Love this....
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

Oh, yes... a roller-coaster, full of breathtaking surprises in each of its ups and downs and curves. Very wise, great work, dear Karla.
(((((((((((((Hugs))))))))))))))

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

wisdom made fun....enjoyed my ride with your words..

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

Wisdom at its best. Great write!

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

|Karla I loved this one, keep up the great work!
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

Karla, it is always interesting the way you play with forms and word patterns as a visual medium in your poetry, adding a line-texture, like art, to the construction of you poems. And,oh yeah, your subject matter is very engaging, as well! Cool stuff!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

An excellent, creative piece karla. Very well done
Love
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

SPU write karla!!

:) loved it...al the ups and downs made my head spin....but I am still okay!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

Well said and clever write. Enjoyed this!

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

Hmmm...somebody's still missin' Cedar Point! LOL Nice write!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

CLEVER and unique write, Karla; this is very creative and well done! Enjoyed this ride; can I have another??? LOL ((((HUGS)))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :) Gee, that was FUN! LOL