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P.A.I.N.! (Revised)
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i hear
taste
see
smell IT--
rising from my body
in nefarious waves--
demanding--unceasing--
i twist
moan
cry
BEG
beseeching my God for
just a hint of relief--
He does not deliver--
no rest
compress
plaster
pill
seems to alleviate
IT--NO thing seems to work--
i'm tortured on the rack--
i yell
scream
shout
shriek
with banshee moan, "enough!"--
it doesn't end--o, no--
and then my brain explodes--
consumed
ravaged
devoured
exhausted
although i don't like IT--
IT is a part of me--
i learn to live with IT--

P.A.I.N.!

(C) Karla Dorman, 2003


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Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Oh YES, I KNOW EXACTLY HOW YOU FEEL KARLA! And you know I do with all my brain surgeries and shunts and tumors and now tumors in the throat and all. Yes,I know PAIN all too well like you do!

This is a QUALITY Write Karla! Excellent! You have great talent!

Reviewed by Heather Bricklin (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2003
Another truly brilliant write.

Reviewed by Sarah Tagert
Reviewed on September 13, 2003
I live w/ daily pain as well, so I can understand this

Reviewed on September 13, 2003
Gentle Hugs, sorry you have to bare this, I know pain all to well myself...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Dee C.
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Oh how sad dear one...I know exactly where you are and wish I could take it all away.
Take one day at a time....prayers for you!
~Dee~

Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Ouch... My dearest friend, each line hurts... I so wish that a relief for chronic pain is found soon... and you are so very brave!...
{{{{{{{Karla}}}}}}}}
~Alexandra~

Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Ah Karla, my sister suffers as you do, she even goes to a pain clinic, doesn't help much, I hate to think of you suffering like this, Your courage and strength to endure this is inspiring,

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
A mesmerizing Write ! Your faith and courage show though! Kudo's!

Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Ouch! I hurt FOR you after reading this, Karla! Hugs!

Julie :)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
I don't know your pain, but it must be bad. Hope God will help you. I would help if I could. Do you think the Long Horns are going to beat my Razorbacks tomorrow in Austin? Razorbacks 17 Long Horns 14. GO HOGS!
Love ya karla.........Ron

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Karla I am so sorry....I live with pain too...so I know...you just get so used to it after awhile...and sometimes it can drive you mad...take care ....emotional write here..floria

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Ouch great write!

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Brilliant poem, Karla. I do hope your pain eases for you soon.
Love
~Chrissie xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Hope your pain will stop soon Karla!!
excellent write about your feelings and pain!!
Love Tinka

Reviewed on September 12, 2003
good description of pain and what it does to a body! like you, i know the enemy intimately. excellent read; enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( *hope you stop hurting soon!* :(


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