under your encouragement i develop under your tender care i thrive under your friendship i blossom i reach toward you . . . my soul absorbs the nutrients of your love i F L O W E R
and become
BEAUTIFUL.
(C) Karla Dorman, 2003.
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Thank you, Author's Den friends, for your prayers, encouragement and, above all, your friendship.
I pray 2004 brings each one of you hope, inspiration, peace and, above all, love.
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Reviews of "Becoming (For Contest)"
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
May your wishes, like waves on oceans blue,
Become a source of peace and joy to you.
Unusual style of writing but very effective. I liked this
Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
Well done and i hope all the best reaches you and yours in this new year. God bless you both...Bravo..You are human be happy...This is achieved by so few...The cost is high...One day at a time...michael
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
Become a source of peace and joy to you.
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Happy New Year!!
Love Tinka
This is excellent sweetie.
Happy New Years
Peg
Allen
Happy New Year to you and Karen!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
and well wishing
you are truly a blessing
A very Happy New Year to you and Karen
Love
~Chrissie xx
I wish you & Karen
a wonderful blessed
new year...
Love & Hugs
Trixie :)
Lovely poem, Karla! I wish nothing but the best for you in the coming year! (And I hope that this poem wins the next contest; you deserve to win! :D)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D