Surface of Your Dreams (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

Thanks for the reminder. Beautiful...

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

"Surface of Your Dreams"

wonderfully inspirational

Thank you for sharing,
Gwendolyn

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

okay, stagnation is death, but death is release... and one gets tired, Sir Ace. sometimes those inner sources simply exhaust themselves and those dreams--good and bad-- simply vanish leaving nothing but The Void.

keen perceptions, vivid imagery, exquisitely expressed,
as always, Sir Ace.

Reviewed by Nila Jamier (Reader)

Reviewed on January 23, 2005

This is wise words and inspirations.
"Always seek the sacred source
Of the motion within you

Steer your thoughts
Into inspired directions"

Nila Jamier

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 23, 2005

Great metaphor here, Ace.

Ron

Reviewed by A. Gagn� (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2005

Sweet advice.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on January 22, 2005

"Steer your thoughts
Into inspired directions"

trying...trying

wonderful poetry

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on January 21, 2005

This poem really does well to inspire a transitory path. It does much to encourage and point out direction lest we stagnate...wonderfully written as all your works are Robert.

Allen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 21, 2005

Great thoughts of advice Robert......
Hope all is well with ya......

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on January 21, 2005

you are one of the best in writing things that moves one
really inspiring.........

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on January 21, 2005

Dear Jude,

Absolutely inspirational, sometimes we tend to forget the beauty that lives within, and all it takes, is a gentle reminder to allow the rivers of life to flow. Thank you for sharing Jude.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on January 21, 2005

Words to live by Ace

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

Sounds good to me!!

Take care

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

Very inspiring piece. Excellent!

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

Very fluid, deeply wise, and inspiring piece.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

okay. i think i'll do that! :)

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

good advice

Reviewed by Eddie Thompson

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

fluid thought and on my rippling colorful moods.....

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

So true. Very wise, for we do eat the words we use. Becoming what we say.

Very profound the ACE..

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

Thanks for sharing this inspirational piece Robert!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

Good inspiring image Robert
best
Ian

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

I second that on this being the dose needed to start the day.

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

This was the dose I needed today. Excellent write Robert.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

This poem is very moving - float on!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

I will! Beautiful beyond words, meaningful below the surface, Jude.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

Exceptional inspirational write Robert especially liked "Steer your thoughts into inspired directions". Well done.

Felix

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

Melting images to feed, water and stimulate fresh growth and creavity! When the deep roots are nourished and protected, nothing can prevent that old sap rising to colour afresh a hard winter's snowscape. The heart truly is our Eden place which takes its energy wherever true life is sourced. A rainbow write with treasure at both ends! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

super duper Robert, I really like this.

Reviewed by Alain Gracio

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

as long as the surface is not formica you will be alright buddy
Cheers
Alain

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2005

Soulful and heart rendering poem delivered so beautifully, Jude ... Your heart is showing and it's a beautiful one ...

Reviewed by Pier Tyler

Reviewed on January 19, 2005

Good advice!
(Steer your thoughts
Into inspired directions)

Words to be heeded. Thanks for sharing this.

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on January 19, 2005

This gem of a poem is filled with encouragement for life worn souls. Wonderful, Jude. I thank you.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 19, 2005

Love the advice you have given here, and I will :-)

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on January 19, 2005

Very wise words grace this page, Robert. We each must take charge of our own life and our own destiny. No one else holds the key to our dreams. If we believe that another can make our dreams come true for us, we will watch our dreams vaporize before our eyes. Love and happiness are gifts that we give to our self. Very nice, centered write!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy

Reviewed on January 19, 2005

Excellent advice :) I'll try to remember that

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 19, 2005

Great advice Robert! Thank you, I'll take it!

Eileen