EverMore (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Fine ode to fidelity, Ace.

Ron

Reviewed on January 27, 2005

There is something majestic about the word "evermore."
I like this..
(Evermore
We are bonded by hope
Together we always cope)

Awesome write.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on January 27, 2005

The mystical, luminous quality of "EverMore" is breathtaking, Sir Ace. Love every line.

Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader)

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

Quoth the ace "evermore". Thanks for telling me about the murder, made me feel at ease. Anyway, nice write. You are soulful for sure.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

I love the soft gentle romatic uplifting feeling this gives me as I read it. Fantastic write.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

Yes this one is full of hope and I enjoyed it evermore.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

A truly captivating romantic write, Robert - the kind of love every living being truly yearns for.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

Pure divine write. Magical when ones with their true love, everything seems so special.
Splendid the ACE..

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

One hell of a love story Robert, so much sincerity, hope and inspiration to young lovers of all ages. Bravo.

Felix

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

Omg This would be a numberone song Robert!!

Most Wow I ever seen!!

This is NOW joke!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

you don't read this poem, you feel it - like gently lapping waves upon a shore. it has an eternal quality that rises above the temporal and one can feel the author stretching his soul into that higher realm. beautiful!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

As ceaseless as the lapping tides that kiss far-distant shores, there is such an intensity present here, and yet such infinity as well. Effortless, flowing rhyme and verse with such cadence and rest that it is almost mesmeric. A tidal wave of passion expressed with the delicate touch of a whisper... I could go on! ... Vulnerability and openess expressed within a circle of strong embrace. You teach us here how it feels to love. Poetry in motion... divine! :)))) TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

So very beautiful Jude, this was just lovely,

Reindeer

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

Sherry expresses my feelings on this longing poem

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

this has a classical feel to it but what really impresses me is the deft way you pulled off the refrain...evermore. Writing a poem with a refrain, whether it be a word, a phrase, a couplet or quatrain is not easily done well...but this is excellent.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

Dear Jude,

absolutely exquisite ! Last stanza really wraps it up for "Evermore".

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

a stunning, sensual write....beautifully done..

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

This is a BRILLIANT artistry with imagery...This poem resonates with excellent sonic quality. I like the repetition.

D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

Seems I remember a crow saying "EverMore" somewhere...did you check with him before you used this...?LOL! Live on, and on, fair poet...ed

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

I agree with, Belle ... just beautiful, Jude ...

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

This is beautiful, Jude

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

This poem makes me weak. It touches my heart and soul very deep within.

Reviewed by Cynthia Borris

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

Robert,

Always a pleasure to read your work. The rhythm and words draw the reader immediately into the scene. Beautiful.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

May your poetry flow ... evermore.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

I would like more
of Evermore,it's perfection of poetry...bravo Robert.
Best wishes always(and evermore too)
from
your avid fan
Kay.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

A great pen of two as one

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

This poem feels like one of the partners has departed and the relationship rests somewhere between higher consciousness and the ethers. There is a haunting feeling that flows throughout the verses. Exceptional write, Robert. This is absolutely beautiful.

Take care,

Sherry

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

It doesn't get more beautiful than this Jude.

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

Haunting, beautiful poem.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

Exquisite expression of devotion to the one you have bonded with
in this way... Very embracing and empowering poem...

Eileen

Reviewed by Nila Jamier (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2005

Evermore this is very beautiful!
Ending is Superb!