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Consuming the Jungle
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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His plane crashed in the jungle months ago
All that was salvageable was a pad and pen
Carefully placed in his back pocket
So he could still scribble his erratic verse

He lived off fruits, berries
And when lucky a sporadic lizard

He kept moving onward to the horizon
Hoping to find his way out of the jungle maze

One day, he saw smoke rising
And cautiously moved closer

He could see a village
Below the treetops

Along a stream
Men were fishing
And women cooking
Smelled so good

A child noticed him and pointed to the elders
Who ran to him so quickly
He had no chance of escape

They gestured to him “come”
He had to obey
Their spears and arrows were many

To his surprise he was greeted
With smiles and amazement
For they had never seen a man
With a diamond in his ear
And whose face shined like the moon

They danced and celebrated
Around the campfire with song and feast
A night of pure wonder

He took much pleasure from their hospitality
From their splendor and awe
And watched with amazement
How they loved to draw
On animal hide with colors of mud

One day, he witnessed how they bowed and prayed
To an idol carved from a tree trunk
Surrounded by rhinoceros horns
And beautiful feathers

Their faith seemed as devout as any other
He had known back home

One night, he was wakened by loud voices and shrills
He looked out his hut and saw a man being killed

He could not believe what he was seeing
They tied the man’s torn body with ropes
And placed him into the fire

“Oh my god! They’re cannibals!
Consuming each other!”

Their peaceful exterior
Was only an illusion

So as the villagers feasted
He silently slipped out of the village

For he determined it was far safer to face
The dangers of the outer jungle alone
       

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 Reviews of "Consuming the Jungle"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 6, 2005
Sounds like a (good) story to me, ....

Ron

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
Dear Jude,
As always you are able to draw your audience in with your captivating words. An exceptionally good read that had me wondering to the end. This would make a great story. Thanks for sharing of your versatile talent with your fellow artists.
Peace to you
Chanti

Reviewed on February 1, 2005
Robert,

Superlatively versed - resoundingly perfect ...


Best regards,

Robert

Reviewed by Nila Jamier (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
WOW What a tale in verse this is well done.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
Well..what can I say..THIS is brilliant..only you Robert, can compose such unique verse..Bravo!!

Vesna :)

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
An excellent eye for detail and a strong narrative brought this tale to life. Well done.

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
Gosh, this could be a metaphor for the concrete jungle humanity resides in today. I don't know about you, but I've encountered my own share of cannibals on the streets of urban sprawl.

Loved the story effect and the building suspense in your lines. Terrific work! :)

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
A splendid tale...a wise man always knows when to leave...great story

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
yep, gotta be very careful in those quaint, unfamiliar places! much enjoyed this poetic tale of widsom triumphant, Sir Ace.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
There are many 'jungles' in life; and often, it's better to travel them alone.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
Yes I sort of thought this would be the conclusion of the poem.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
Excellent tale with a great lesson within it. Nature can be trusted even when it appears dangerous.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
EXCELLENT rendition through this story...There are lessons to be learnt!

D

PS: S1 L4: eratic-->erotic/erratic

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
Isn't that the way? Great write!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
Brings a new meaning to, inviting your mates round for dinner..

I really enjoyed this the ACE..

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
Often things are not as they seem. His initial gut instinct was fear, but he allowed their hospitality and awe of him to color his judgement. Cultural traditions and people's will are difficult, if not impossible, to change. We can, for a while, delude others, but at some point, our true colors will show through. Excellent story/poem, Robert. One should always be aware of the people that they associate with, trust their gut feelings and never allow another to change the color of our world. The relationships that we have kept close for extended periods of time are the ones that we know we can trust to have our best interests at heart.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
A story full of realism.

Reviewed on February 1, 2005
A poem with a lot of thoughts therein

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
Seems no matter which jungle to choose we are in danger of being eaten...capitivating stuff Robert.

Paul;-}

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
For he determined it was far safer to face
The dangers of the outer jungle alone

The solitude and danger of the outer jungle looks better many times than life among devout cannibals. Sometimes we need our own private place to call home where we are strengthened and educated for the encounters with savages. Incredible story, deeply thought provoking, Jude.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
Wow great story and I think the moral shines through at the end, sometimes we can only rely on ourselves to see us out of the jungles of reality, Great write Robert
Felix

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
Lol...scary...just remembered a question you asked about a funny arm
on my picture I posted with my poem "Tinky The Hardworking Farm Girl"
Well that was me holding the hind-quarter bones of an ox we slaughtered... and was showing you how to use it as a cricket-bat!!
Smacking a six {home-run in baseball} with it OKAY!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
Great picture, Robert. I've heard so many stories of people being lost in the jungle - and headhunter tribes can be very nice people. I would rather stay in the village - our western bodies are probably to polluted for consumption. Franz

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
For a minute there Rob, I thought you were headed for the POT, you had me on the edge of my seat LOL.
Extreme deliverance of a most painful subject.

Ch'erie

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
What a story! Looks can be so deceiving and had he known, I'm sure he wouldn't have accepted their hospitality. Glad he got away unscathed or the cannibals would have had a luau in his honor! Whoa and what a feast! ;)

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on January 31, 2005
A riviting tale Robert...and to think...I was once about 100 dollars short of being able to go to such a place for a month...glad I didn't now...

Allen

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 31, 2005
Many want to escape from the jungle of todays world of confusion and strife where it seems the savages are a majority forcing us into our own little worlds. Sadly that is not the answer,but no one seems to know the answer, so they just slip out of the village...

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on January 31, 2005
wonderful tale kinda spooky
see how the title fits in here
enjoyed it.....

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on January 31, 2005
whew! well done

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 31, 2005
... Absolutely, and you never know when you're goin to be next!! Lucky man, unlucky lizard. Having a moon-face can obviously have it's advantages - though I have never thought so until now! Love the typo in line 3, where you are talking about erratic verse!! Captivating and salutary tale. TY Kate xx


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