Chalice of Life (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by A. Gagn� (Reader)

Reviewed on February 10, 2005

Fantastic! :)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

Drinking full, the fullfillment within, my friend.

Ron

Reviewed by Helen Downey

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

WOW! A heavy piece inwhich I was totally absorbed into.

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

I loved this. You have a unique turn of phrase.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

Robert you always fascinate me with your compelling writes.

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

This is an equisite piece of work, just loved it.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

a fascinating perspective, Ace...as cynth'ya said, you never disappoint....outstanding write

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

Missed "reading" you, Ace.
And I am never disappointed.
blessin's
cynth'ya

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

Superb poetry Robert!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

But the really lovely part is that you allowed everyone else a sip from the jeweled goblet of this very generous poem. Peace.

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

I like everything about this piece. The message, the flow, the meanings behind the metaphors...

One of my favorite lines:
"Unconcerned with the ridicule of onlookers
Standing beside a liquefied edge of interpretation"

Totally unique persepctive !! :)

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

A very wise poem...superbly written. Michelle

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

I move to higher ground

You're usually on the path to ever higher ground, and this poem is no exception.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

This does bring to mind the magnifiicent tundra of Gladstonbury..
A feast of images here, that leave one lamenting, and thirsty for the beauty life has to offer..

Kate why you starting so late?

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

Progress built on dreams in itself, is a beuatiful image. Drinking from the chalice of life, being able to create an image beyond the model's forms is magnificient...

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

Well put together Robert, this is a good insight to what keeps you going and a good example for us all to follow. Great write, I bow to the master.

Felix

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

I agree Robert. There are many ways to place the lights in order to get the view one might 'want' us to get, but we have to be strong enough, to see what 'really' is, not just the mirage of make-up and backdrops.
One must be willing to look, before they could ever see.
Excellent writing!

Lisa

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

This is absolutely incredibly beautiful. One of your best Jude.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

well said

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

BINGO!! You are on a roll here, Jude, and this one goes straight into my fav top ten... the evocative metaphors are both scintillating and tantalising, and the whole poem just oozes with "tingle factor", whilst at the same time rooting the emotions in the firm substance of the security of deep friendship: such precious relationships of true connection are indeed the well-spring of life itself. And, in the light of that knowledge, the "I move to higher Where the river travels uphill" seems the glorious paradox that is utterly comprehensible and delightful. Your words here are like the bubbling liquid, the contents of this most precious grail that you speak of! Bring on the bubbly...!! :)) (No, Andy; it's only 1030 and I haven't had a single drop yet!!) TY Kate xx :))

Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

Robert, move to the higher ground,
Ah, I think you are there already.

Great poem Robert, I want you to drink to your fill.

Emeka Chike Nwogu

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

This is beautiful and so inspirational A very good way to condition the mind and always remember.. life's a trap and this is wonderful to never let oneself fall into that trap. Individuality. Thank You
Love Tracey

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

This is both spirtual and metaphysical, and good advise
pax A

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Wonderfully written, Jude ...

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

"... feeding dreams with prophecy progress..." well said, Sir Ace.
A pleasure, as always.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

once you find and have tasted a gem
from truth you'll do anything...there are no boundaries
you make one think
enjoyed you.........

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

YES! Now this is what I call strength! Excellent. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Layers of texture, colors and observations of personalities give this poem a life of richness and growth. The ending is superb. Keep drinking from the old friend's chalice. Fantastic write, Jude.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Old friends are tired and true, enabling us to trust their motivations where we are concerned. Being human, we all unfold throughout our lifetimes so it is true that we are always just beginning to know one another. We each have so much to offer, that the rewards of sticking with someone for the long haul can be bountiful.

These are great lines:

"I move to higher ground

Where the river travels uphill

And the scenery is embellished with hope"

This poem is a profound statement of hope and faith, Robert. Excellent writing!

Take care,

Sherry

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Llife is a joy when we allow it to be :-) Great message written within these lines.

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Hi Robert
This is comforting to me just now. I recently dared to embrace
the leading edge or my horizon. My shadow engulfed me from behind
within 24 hours -- still seeking to re-establish equilibreum.
Vicky

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Splendid poem! Hold fast to that friend
you'll never find a better one!

etw

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

This is very good, Robert. I like this a lot.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)