i will give up my heart (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

tender outpouring of your heart

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

I'm just coasting the Den catching up on my reading. Jude, this is beautiful. I'm sorry to use such a mundane word to express myself, but I can't think of another. It's a gloriously romantic expression of love. If it's written to a real person, she's most fortunate.

Reviewed by Rita Faith

Reviewed on February 19, 2005

I understand this, and like this one a lot. It is very romantic in a none-depthy kind of way.Gosh,many women would like to be "loved" this strongly.Just think some have never loved or been loved therefore the ---loss---beauty will never happen.

Thanks, it was nice! I felt quite moved by it.

Regards Rita from UK

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Ohhhh, this is extremely soul-full, Jude. Beautiful expressions.

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

So very beautiful and deeply moving ... Jude

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

This took my breath away. The essence of this poem speaks to me of a love that cannot be. A longing between two people who can never really be together. I've known that feeling well.

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on February 15, 2005

This poem evoked such longing in me. Isn't this what we all crave so much? May your dreams become reality dear poet.
With love.. Chanti

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on February 14, 2005

this is so lovey, so touching
it would make for a wonderful song
i could see some brit band (or other like band)like duran duran
or aha stuck inside the computer the girl outside the computer sitting reading this and there you are trying to get to her
(boy imagination what a beautiful thing Smile)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 13, 2005

I believe this is touching on a wonderful love that we as readers know so little bout except that your sincerity shines through.

Felix

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

Your words again do thier magic.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

this is such a beautiful piece Robert...so very beautiful.

Allen

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

Life is too short not to make our dreams our reality. The safety that we feel in keeping our distance will, in the end, leave us lonely and unhappy. Beautiful loving write, Robert. Well timed with Valentine's Day.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

Yes, this is much-0 love
Another master piece Robert...

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

A very beautiful write this one is.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

Sounds like mega love to me, Jude. Beautifully expressed. I'm totally with you in this write. I can relate. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

as always, an excellent write...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

You gotta make those dreams come true. Before you go old and crickly then there be nightmare regrets..

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

A stunning write.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

The longing alone in this pen should create the reality

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

Love can be extremely captivating, as is this poem, Robert.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

Oh the power of your pen is mighty Robert!!

This is just way above good!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

Devastatingly bittersweet, Sir Ace! Powerfully penned. Literally morphs the reader into an altered state. I did not think you could top "Evermore", but you did. Such tremendous talent, Poet.
Beautifully crafted--as always.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

Very appropriate for Valentines Day upcoming

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

Yeah well IMHO dreams always sell you short, like the good ones you are having and....you wake up ;)

Intense and sincere TY ROB
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 12, 2005

You always seem to speak from the mighty depths of your soul when you write, Jude, so who could fail to be totally overwhelmed by this from your very first line? You have the sounds of all the consummate waters of heaven and earth in your voice and, as such, this is flawless, matchless, perfect... and priceless, like a precious pearl. And, more than even YOUR dreams will ever allow?! How can that be when the word "impossible" does not appear in the Forese dictionary?!... Is anyone still breathing after this?! Utterly gorgeous, TY Kate xx (Brief, Kate, brief!! Am trying!!)

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

Dear Jude,

Exquisite ... the heart of the romantic never fails, the soul understands so well and the dream will forever live on. Absolutely loved this Jude :)

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

Ah yes, now this was beautiful poetry,

Reindeer

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

Rapturous...pure heaven. Bene! Bene!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

I hope your dreams allow what you so passionately seek,
and I hope she is worth it! Exquisite poetry...

etw

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

The passion and romance in this is fantastic!