Masterpiece (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on April 13, 2005

Nothing unfinished about this one, wordsmith!

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

Truly excellent with your special touch, your words will always have their radiance.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Another masterpiece you've written Jude...beautiful

Peace, Carole

Reviewed by Jennifer Ragan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Interesting;)

Jennifer

Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

We are indeed unfinished masterpieces, works in progress. xo

Reviewed by Ann Marquette

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Beautiful imagery Jude...
i find myself sitting inside my home on an early morning with a cup of coffee or hot chocolate and in a trance at the picture before me.

thank you,
ann

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

fascinating imagery
felt the shifting here

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Indeed a Masterpiece created by the absolute finest! Beautiful, Jude ...

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Two souls drifting apart or a moment of clarity?...Another fine thought-provoking work Ace...I don't know how you keep churning out
such great work...But don't ever stop...

EDL

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

as always; nicely done

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Wonderful balance here between aesthetic observation and emotional engagement. Extremely nice write from one of the best pens around.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Robert,

"Masterpiece" by a master poet - brillant work!!

Best to you,

Robert

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Beautiful.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Cool piece Robert, painted quite a picture for the mind to ponder over. G

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Men! A bunch of peeping Toms the whole lot of yous. ;-)

A provocative write here, Jude, with the gentle flow of a whispering brook. We often overlook "true masterpieces" in the making when we look only with physical eyes. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Love the way you used the arts to express your thoughts. People can be a real mystery.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

It is masterful. Like this line:
"But the easel I now see
Holds the likeness of someone I no longer
know"

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

You have painted a portrait of illusion, and a very fine likeness indeed!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

As I look deeply into the imagery you are portraying I see beauty but I also sense a sadness or longing for something that might have been. Hits home Robert with a solid impact. thank you for sharing your heart and soul.

Felix

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

You have a brilliant inner eye! This is artistic excellence!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

This poem is a masterpiece in its own right. (or is it write?) Your vivid words worked like the brush of an accomplished artist to paint a picture of life and of someone who has a bit of mystery about them that you are still challenged to understand. Beautiful write, Robert.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by jacqueline amos

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

My beloved brother your title goes with the power of your pen, you are such a blessing to the world, and your wisdom brings links to the other side of our father house. It is always a honor to be in your space, continue to teach master poet.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Dorian Grey..You ain't got a painting in the loft going all old and ugly?

This does have that magical feel. Like some of Wildes works.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

The moment well expressed Robert!!

Great to see you feeling less "Coughing"!!

This is a breather of a write!!

Love Tinka ;p

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Your title of this one lives up to its advance billing. Good work, indeed. - Bill

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Wonderful poem that is sooo creative! I truly enjoyed your art!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

A masterpiece of a poem, Robert.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

As always, I can count on first class poetry whenever I click onto your name,no disappointmets this time,perfect as always.My favorite line:
'Where the imagery is cubist and laced with foreign angles '

Excellent!
Best wishes always to you and yours
from
Kay.

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

In this writing your palette and brushes dance with your inspiration through a world that has always spoken to me and through which I find, sometimes, the only language in which to speak. Art. Here, you paint a masterpiece of that unfinished masterpiece that evolves through many styles and stages... like Art (like life) itself.
Love&Light*
Alexandra*

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

an outstanding write Robert

William .....Peace

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Artistic travel through time, space and inner landscape can be quite a Bunyan Pilgrim's Progress sometimes. You have captured something very special here for me... that the outward expression of whatever creative form we present is somehow devoid of true meaning unless the heart and soul are where it is birthed. Beauty for its own sake can impress with its breathtaking excellence and produce an enormous awe, but it is spiritually "cold" perhaps. Yet something which has the essence of its creator within it is able to make the sort of connection with the souls of others that moves them deeply... Now, how did I extrapolate this from your poem above??! No idea, but perhaps I am just proving my own point here! No matter; this is roundly beautiful and delivers its proposition with a gracious delicacy. And it has given me inspiration today to revisit the unfinished business of my own Artist and Model!! :)) TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Alexandre Arnau

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

a moment of clarity beautifully expressed

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

This reminds me of a copy of a picasso I

downloaded and is as much of an enigma...

beautiful esoteric poem

etw

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

As are all your writes as well, Bob...What with work of late, I have been missing reading you...I am done with 7 day weeks for a bit...hope you are well...Ed & Rufuz