Inside You (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

As sugar cane inside a field of dreams - delicious

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 5, 2005

a home run in this field of dreams.

ron

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 11, 2005

Robert, this one is sweet heat.
Sensuality at it's best

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on April 11, 2005

Beautiful inside,outside, and all levels in betweeen.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

you really ought to give us some warning or something... I always psyche myself up to think and get lost in some philosophical wonderment or dreamtime, but, man oh man... and I mean precisely that. very nicely done.

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

I almost missed this! Ummmm, this is a stirring

piece of work...to put it mildly!

"Inside you

There is light within the covering

There is passion yet defined

There is an opening to a world

At one time, I could only imagine"

I love that!

Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

Yesss, this one's a keeper. Mm mm good to the last drop of words. :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

This is a very sensous delightful write that is full of passion!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

Enchantedly sensual, Robert...

Peace, Carole

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

mmm..incredible write..sensual..spiritual..REAL! wow!
saved this one..
Vesna*

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

Sounds like you found comfort. Excellent. ~ Sara

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

as always well done

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

Sensual beauty!!!!

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

Erotica can't seep in any more sweetly and stylishly than this... ;0)
Love&Light*
Alexandra*

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

Explosive sensuality ... think I need a drink and a smoke!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

Very sensual write, Ace.
I was really getting into it!
That's good!

Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

An imagination, filled with love... never ends, just keeps expanding... excellent write

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

Greeeeeeeaaaaaattttt! I love the sensuousness of this poem...the images are wonderful! ;) Silver

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

Robert!...... I love this side of you! This is raw passion, hot and sensual with vivid imagery that makes the mouth water! ( and the thighs squiver!)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

A poem like this will put saccharin out of
business... the berry prefers sugar cane;-)
luscious poem...

Eileen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

well, now...this is breathtaking, robert! superbly sensual; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

Outstanding, Robert.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

Sensuality becomes you, Jude, me sweet... you can lift a reader to amazing heights and then caress her slowly back to earth. Tasteful erotica that is tasty, smooth and definitely consuming. Passion becomes you. katy xox

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

aaaashes...

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

A beautifully passionate and sensuous poem, Jude ... Smooth and solid as a sugar cane? Mercy! ;)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

Lovely and sweet!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

This tastes like love in full bloom, Robert. A sintillating write as sweet as maple syrup poured upon a feast of intriguing thoughts. This is very nice!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

~~Nordette

Reviewed by M Flack

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

Passionate and erotic. Very full of images created by well crafted words. Well done...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

Sounds like a wondrous new world - and this is quite a poem, Robert.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

classy and erotic........beautiful :)

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

Exquisitely done as only the master of metaphors can do. A youthful look at loves first encounter in the depths of passion and fulfillment.

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

I do like this, the metaphor is a total sugar-rush of expression and passion, excellent Jude.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

Jude, this should carry a health warning to diabetics... and to those of us prone to spontaneous combustion! Searing passion that is not only physical but spiritual as well, a total mystic fusion. "Hot" is an altogether too cold and leaden word to use to describe the intensity here: a metamorphic furnace! There is yet a tenderness in the flame, too, I think, and an elegant beauty. Wholly melting. TY Kate xx