I feel like a frontiersman
Seeing the terrain for the first time
Looking upon the outskirts of the continental plains,
Dreaming of the Pacific Coast on the expanding western horizon
Wondering what I’d imagine
Of the world as it is today
Wondering if I would marvel
Over a children’s playground
Or become puzzled over its intent:
For all the children I know
Amuse themselves in the countryside
Of their own imagination
And play hide in the seek
In the grasslands and corn fields
Stretching out for miles
What would I think of lighthouses?
Guiding the way for cargo ships
Returning with a full bounty
Or sailing into the rough seas
Transporting crops and technology to foreign lands
Would I be amazed at a butterfly kite riding the wind?
As enormous oil barges come into the sound
Bellowing below rainbow breezes
Would I have the time inquire
Into the verse of men and women
Scattered across the steel and glass landscapes
Of Johnny Apple Seed dreams?
Would I stand in awe of the stars and stripes
Flapping across the winds of modern history?
And what would I think about a world economy?
And the stock market sanctuary?
And of the endless wars spilling blood and hatred
Upon the battlefields of the almighty dollar
Doused with culture, religion and greed?
Would I speculate on the half-truths?
Uttered by leaders and neighbors
Attempting to justify the reasons of their iron masks
Hiding behind utterly maddening motives
Whatever I would wonder
I hope I would never lose sight of my dreams
Or lose the desire to forage on
Like many of the settlers surrounding me
Are beginning to feel
the steel and glass landscapes
Of Johnny Apple Seed dreams
great line, first off... odd where our dreams can lead us. what I love most about this is freedom planted not only in the veins, but in the very powers of thought your pilgrim heart expresses subtly. And, of course, the equal power of astute observation re: the melee of modernity. this one sang loud and clear to my pioneer heart that sometimes loses its way in discouragement over all the madness and confusion. We are the dreamers who can forge a path into that landscape of apathy and cut a river of hope straight through from sea to shining sea and clear around the world. My fingers - and heart - are getting a bit carried away here... time for me to sail. Dawn
Some of us are mistaken for the hopeless; however, that's not it. Sometimes we're just resting a moment, meditating, and wait for a clearer vision of the dream, to catch our second wind, then come out again, our horses refreshed, wagons restocked with provisions, and guns polished and reloaded with a whole new generation of iron mask penetrating bullets the enemy's never seen. But we only need such weapons if someone insists on fighting; otherwise, it's all about exploration of life.
A highly imaginative penning, poet, with food for thought. Thank you for the extended trip. ~~Nordette ;-)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2005
You have expressed the answer in a most wonderful way in the way in which you expressed the bare truths, ending with the need to hold onto the real dream :-) the new reality :-) I love your style!
Very wise retrospective look back at both history and your life in it. To answer your question I think you would have beenquite the adventurer, like me you seem to see the romance first in all the wild events of the past.
A unique and powerfully imaged personal declaration. (There's a line in there somewhere, about the right and duty to speak out against that which is "wrong", isn't there? In the DofI, I mean) I like the juxtaposition of the sensitive and considerate against the advancing, and perhaps dehumanising, powers of thought and progress that harden the mind and heart like burnished steel. In fact, the more I look at this the more intricately woven I see it it be, contrasting all the metal against the flesh and blood that is pulsating and palpable. My American tutor wrote the most powerful 4-line prose piece about "the power of the flag" that I could send you... it says it all. Forage on, Forese, as long as you keep unearthing these gorgeous truffles for the rest of us to find!... And it IS bizarre: I have been working on my poem "Settlers" for workshop tomorrow, and I have just written one about imperialism that's in the bag for later. Reckon our parrots MUST have crossed paths somewhere out on those old Seven Seas... you can have the one with the wooden leg and I'll take the one with the eye-patch: Aye, aye, Captain!! :)) (It's going to be a looooong month!) TY K xx
Powerful write, R.J. We need to look back one last time to move forward. I hope that the brave new world is one that is life and soul sustaining. I hope that we have learned from our greedy mistakes. But more than this, I hope that we, each of us, can finally embrace the ideals of our forefathers and make them reality and not just a dream on paper...
You've captured what it would be like to return as a visitor to a world becoming more alien to basic human values. I remember my grandmother on her deathbed when she was ready to jettison to the other side, saying, "I'm ready, I know longer feel part of this world."
I am wondering if you would simply be in "information overload" as you saw things flickering past on a television screen or listened to it all on the radio. Dreams were simple back in the time of pioneers. To be so involved in the business of their neighbors or certainly those of another land would probably be quite befuddling to them. As far as losing sight of dreams, to do so is to take the easy way out and blame others or situations for our own lack of desire to work to realize our dreams. The very fact that they are "our dreams" should remind people that no one else is responsible for making them come true nor can anyone else really keep them from coming true. People have become apathetic and I feel that is, perhaps, the most destructive force threatening us today. A really excellent poem, Robert, providing a varietal banquet of ideas for the reader to feast upon and digest from their own perspective.
Take care,
Sherry
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thank you for this,
evan
William ......Peace
Elizabeth
Of Johnny Apple Seed dreams
great line, first off... odd where our dreams can lead us. what I love most about this is freedom planted not only in the veins, but in the very powers of thought your pilgrim heart expresses subtly. And, of course, the equal power of astute observation re: the melee of modernity. this one sang loud and clear to my pioneer heart that sometimes loses its way in discouragement over all the madness and confusion. We are the dreamers who can forge a path into that landscape of apathy and cut a river of hope straight through from sea to shining sea and clear around the world. My fingers - and heart - are getting a bit carried away here... time for me to sail. Dawn
An intriguing poem full of wonderment...
Jennifer:)
Excellent Write For Frontear'sman...
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Descripted and imaged to a whole new exemplary poetic level ... perfection!!
Blessings,
Robert
Peace and love, Carole
A highly imaginative penning, poet, with food for thought. Thank you for the extended trip. ~~Nordette ;-)
enticing with the steel and glass. Great write.
Love Tinka
Yes, forage on and you'll find others walking beside you.
Blessings,
Joseph
Felix
Wonderous perspective. I am awed at the visuals. Your angst and feelings are shared by so many of us....
B
Take care,
Sherry
with its warts as well as its beauty. It exhorts
us to "see" what we are looking at...and give it
thought. There are still things we can do to make
things better...Superb mind expanding wake up poem!
We are still blessed and must never stop seeking
new horizons and hopes
en ami~Alrisha