(In my dream I am running
Running through a field of broken glass)
Running from something inside yourself that you don't want to face, over broken glass (love, which is dangerous. It can hurt badly!)
Chuckles. The interpretation of those two lines may be wrong, but It's a great write! (Yours, not the interpretation.:)
you really don't have to write a poem so we'll all think of you naked ;) the den's all abuzz no doubt about your little flight from the hive. take care and wear some clothes today. Dawn
A honey of a write. Go ahead and dream. We busy bees can't think for all the buzz in the hive and our own worry for winter and gathering pollen. Buzz above the frey. Bees communicate with the vibration of their legs and wings. We'll be listening for the message, Jude...
This is thrilling, Jude, imbued with a buzz of anticipation rather than with the tremors of fear and anxiety! It's amazing how invincible we can feel when filled with hope: so much of how life evolves is dependent on our attitudes as we approach it, rather than circumstantial elements, I think. This is a colourful mind-matrix of conscious and subconscious thought, perhaps, and it is releasing and empowering to have the "naked" dream that speaks of a positive readiness for exposure, rather than the angst-ridden vulnerability-thing. The sky's the limit... or not, in fact! :)) And yep, seems like our Extra Sensory Parrots have been dialoguing out on the High Seas of Inspiration again: it was a toss-up for posting last night between Alice, a "Leaves"-y type poem and a "Skin" poem: naked, of course! Hope we don't get stung!!! LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2005
A mystical dream that would of been interesting to have. I could not help but find a lot of meaning in the last stanza. You are a busy bee in the astral world :-)
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2005
Okay and this sounds like one of my dreams. But buzz away Robert.
Well I think a shrink would have a field day with this one Jude but it sure is a magical mystery tour as the Beatles would no doubt say and you presetn it with strong almost spiritual images that defy logic yet are so logical when you write them. Clean write my friend,
Felix
Now this is the kind of dream I'd like as a duet;-)
Captivating imagery that overwhelms the minds synapses!
You painted a picture I won't easily forget;-)A grandiose poem!
LOL, Robert...That naked dream always makes me feel uneasy, though I am usually in some public place and the center of the activity when suddenly I realize that I am naked!! Yours is a much more detailed and freeing dream than mine is and perhaps being stripped naked in your dream is by choice. Perhaps you wish to enter into the new realms with no secrets, feeling the security of known acceptance by those you have gone to meet. Cool story/dream/poem. It truly intrigued me and drew me in. Your images are fantastic!
Take care,
Sherry
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Running through a field of broken glass)
Running from something inside yourself that you don't want to face, over broken glass (love, which is dangerous. It can hurt badly!)
Chuckles. The interpretation of those two lines may be wrong, but It's a great write! (Yours, not the interpretation.:)
Pollinated by a skull bee
Lying down naked in an orange grove
Watching butterflies bloom"
The images are so vivid, the language so
liquid...if that is the word I want
The sound you hear is applause!!
'Pea'
Peace and love, Carole
Love Tinka
Felix
Captivating imagery that overwhelms the minds synapses!
You painted a picture I won't easily forget;-)A grandiose poem!
Alrisha
Take care,
Sherry