you do create an effect

Beautifully expressed, Sir Ace, as always.

And I missed this?!! Take a vacation and what do you do? Write this infinitely gorgeous and cosmic love poem. A rare beauty-as she must be Jude...

Jude,

So...this explains the Owl! This is stunning...if I say anymore I will be blushing in the morning! lol! I DO HOPE you are going to do something with this? Future print, yes?

Jude,

You have SUCH a way with emotion and imagery...making me wish I'd written this, dang it!! Very well done--enjoyed the journey your words took me on--again! Again!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Covers both inner and outer space.

Ron

Excellent... you have a way of touching a "cord" that make the reader wishing/waiting for more...

Mmmm... you are humming to the hive again, Jude. Yes, tonight I can believe this! I have got me dancing shoes on 'cos I have just finished my coursework - yey! The sky is indeed the limit (not!) for this stuff of soulmates and I wish I could just click me heels and disappear over that rainbow! An Armageddon write - if you know the Liv Tyler/Ben Affleck film; a beginning and not an end! Actually, the cool Aerosmith title-track tune would fit rather nicely with this. Careful how you land, Buddy... at this rate she will be destined to spontaneously combust if you come within 30 paces! In fact, an alternative for the final line would be "explodes" as well as "explores"?!... Have another look at my "Falling" poem! :)) Covers similar ground!... but, for now, SCHOOL'S OUT....yEEESSS!! lol kATE XX

Self exploration in rich, heavy, aromatic ideas. Wonderful as always, Jude. By the way, you have a very pleasant voice (on your bio page) Like the new picture, also. Janet

A romantic beauty of a write.

That sounds like a great space to be within!

well done

Your way with words always pleases my innermost emotions...and takes me into your world. Love the way you tantalize...
Antoinette

This is a poem of romance that is poured not from the pen but from the heart. There is a soulful feel to this love you speak of and it causes the reader to ponder their own lifetime and reattach themselves to a time when these emotions filled their days. An absolute beauty of a poem, Robert. Very well structured and delivered.
Take care,
Sherry

Beautiful write my friend, you are becoming the master of romance here on the den...well done

Felix

There is indeed a very fertile ground beneath, and a very fertile sky beyond the surface of this beautiful poem.
Love&Light*
Alexandra*

Sounds like quite a flight, and quite a landing, Robert.

You are a master of imagery. The lady readers may ask, "Why was that not said to me?" While the gentlemen ask, "Why couldn't I have said that?"

Wonderful celestial write! Enjoyed.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

I do believe that Tinka said it very well Jude...excellent!

Peace and love, Carole

Eloquent and uplifting in many ways!
A very sufisticated poem!;-)

Alrisha

A class Act this is!!

Suberb Robert!!

Love Tinka

WOW, sounds like you're putting together a collection of poems entitled either "How to Seduce A Woman," Jude, or "Deeper Communion With God." ;-) Maddening stuff here, man. Good reading.

congratulations on a great use of metaphore poet Robert Jude. I give this an A foe its excellence

Full of wondrous images. Well done.