In the dream state I have been extremely active this past month so if anyone was sharing these moments with me they would wonderful and horrifying experiences. To dream is to explore all possibilites and it is amazing and wonderful when we bring it into reality. I enjoyed the concept of this write.......and beyond :-)
This is a truly romantic write of immense desire, not lust but the desire to be as close as you can to being one with your soul mate. Well covered topic.
Awake or asleep, some soulmates share a place of light that somehow they are just "in" together, don't know how or why. Totally inexplicable. I would doubt very much if you have to concentrate too hard on gaining access to that space... light has a habit of reflecting back onto and returning to its source, so you could find that you are just gazing into a mirror here! Perhaps your OWN light is both the potent splendour dreamed about and what is also keeping you awake!! Just a thought... but, my goodness, this is melting; the ambience you create here is heavenly in terms of its loving tranquility and mutuality. A very strong write that has deservedly made a profound impact. Hypnotic, thank you! LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2005
A dreamy, soft and romantic poem, Jude ... Beautifully written ...
A sublime vision that does not avoid commitment to intimacy but seeks more deeply to cultivate and celebrate it. A moving write that beautifully fuses the romantic and the spiritual.
As you lay awake listening, think long enough focus hard enough, and allow your mind total freedom, and soon you will find yourself drifting toward the light within her. Once again another exquisite write Jude, thanks for sharing. :)
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Ron
This is a truly romantic write of immense desire, not lust but the desire to be as close as you can to being one with your soul mate. Well covered topic.
Felix
Paul;-)
This is so human and transcendent at the same time! You've captured
the absolute beauty and nakedness of being in awe! Gorgeous!
Peace, Carole
Take care
Reindeer
Have a great 5th-0oooops, 4th!
Peter
Most excellent!!
Love Tinka
and inspire
William .....Peace
Enjoy...I'm sure she will;-)
Eileen
As you lay awake listening, think long enough focus hard enough, and allow your mind total freedom, and soon you will find yourself drifting toward the light within her. Once again another exquisite write Jude, thanks for sharing. :)
warm hugs and love
Elga