I'm sure I squizzed this before leaving for my flight at 3 a.m. BST - but it seems very different to how I remember it; have you reworked it? Probably just my brain readin it while still asleep... Like Tigger with the Marmite, I just want to roll this around my mind for a while (or mouth, in his instance), to suck it and see... it's like a gobstopper that's too big for me to chew on right now as it's so intricately divined and designed, as peeps have said. Feels like I'm staring into the back of an old Swiss watch and marvelling at how it works - but not yet understanding what time is! Safe to say, this IS divine, Jude...
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2005
I have few words to share at the moment but I can tell you that each of your poems touches me; as this one has.
"It is the realization
That as you observe life you alter it
By blending into its perspective."
And through this realization, faith is indeed the most powerful catalyst of change, transformation, growth, and integrates the attributes of Dream... then, "we are (become) what we seek". The whole poem is an exceptional literary conception animated by the rich reflection of a sentient spirit and an expansive mind, but these particular lines strike me as pure consciousness in motion, sharing its glow. Thank you, Jude.
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
"Faith is the substance of things hoped for, the evidence of things unseen." I can't help it, whenever someone starts a sentence with the words "faith is," that quote from the book of Hebrews leaps to my mind. And with your use of words such as "force" and "harnessing," I further meditate on the biblical verse that indicates faith is not simply a concept but a "substance," something of which we may take hold, something we can embrace to move forward in our lives. May I add that we can even move backward by faith, if our beliefs are negative. By faith, what we and in whom we choose to believe, we create and either free ourselves from or confine ourselves to a state of being. You've penned a thought-provoking, instructive poem, Jude. Thank you for sharing your insights in to the real state of existence. ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2005
ooooo... Jude, as you drew me in and the message moved, the bulk of each grouping grew, too... then... staccato, cuplets to finish and 2 fully-packed words at the end.
I marveled at the 'design' of this, then reread to be part of the thoughts again. katy xox
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2005
A very well written piece is FAITH'S CONVICTION, Jude.
You have reached another plateau in your evolution
This is another splendid poem of perfection spelling
out in words as only you can, what faith truly is. Bravo Jude!
So very true, Robert. We are the ones who place the shackles upon us; refusing to soar because we lack the belief that it is possible. We struggle to not blend into all that surrounds us believing that it would rob us uf our free-will. However, the opposite is true as we are each a spoke in the wheel, a fiber in the Great Mandala; each unique and essential to all that is. Excellent thought-provoking, inspired write.
Peace, Carole
To all of the possibilities
Of the unconditional imagination
Experiencing itself through you"
YES!!!
That as you observe life you alter it
By blending into its perspective."
And through this realization, faith is indeed the most powerful catalyst of change, transformation, growth, and integrates the attributes of Dream... then, "we are (become) what we seek". The whole poem is an exceptional literary conception animated by the rich reflection of a sentient spirit and an expansive mind, but these particular lines strike me as pure consciousness in motion, sharing its glow. Thank you, Jude.
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
an insight filled examination of faith
thought provoking and inspired
good right
john+
I marveled at the 'design' of this, then reread to be part of the thoughts again. katy xox
Stunning in its wisdom.
~Mari
Felix
Reindeer
Love Tinka
Peter
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
This is another splendid poem of perfection spelling
out in words as only you can, what faith truly is. Bravo Jude!
Eileen
Take care,
Sherry