Dream Scene (q) ... Tuning Up with the Stars (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

... And Sir Paul sings "Let It Be"! You certainly take a sad song and make it better, anyhow. :))

Reviewed by Jennifer Butler (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2005

We are fat enough with the wealth of modern invention. I must pull out my violin again, and help to fill that concert hall with a beautiful sound.

Reviewed by Sara Russell

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

Sometimes music does that to me while I'm awake too... great imagery in this one! Thanks for sharing.

Sara.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

Dear Jude,

Beautifully inspiring and the imagery so vivid and alive, a mind so alive and powerful... :)

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

You don't need composers, with dreams like this...
don't need a roof to confine, the sky is the limit...
or is it...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

Shudda been a songwriter. ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

Read my review on Eileens Dream Poem, it applies here as well. Thank you for your kindness.

Love to you my friend, Janny xoxoxo

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

Wow! What great images. Excellent poem

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

exquisite and full of the music of life

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

Lovely imagery, Jude. Beautiful. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

Dreams that inspire others to reach for the stars within.
Great write Jude!
~Chanti~

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

contentment is such a great word

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

Such a beautiful write! Its filled with so many entities - divine power and love, peace and serenity, magic, cosmic love and contentment. Its just wonderful!

God bless, Robert!

Sandie.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

A perfect treat for the senses and the soul...

Peace, Carole

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

Jude, you had me right from the title... but... this one blew me down: "the composer within all things..." I just lingered on that line for a bit, a creation of words. That's the sort of line that any self-respecting poet should wish like hell he/she had written.

I especially like the way you "punctuated" the piece by spacing it from cuplet to some bulk to 1 line alone and on... You're very clever that way. Great stuff... I'm keeping this one. katy xox

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

Oh My this is sooooo filled with magic...and the imagery so vivid!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

Another truly marvelous poetic dream, Robert - Dream On!

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

well done

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 15, 2005

You are one with the symphony of cosmic love as it sings its beautiful music of Creator's love through the stars into your being!

An exquisite dream, exceptionally depicted.

Eileen

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 15, 2005

Attuned with the stars is what it sounds like to me, Robert. This is an excellent dream. I like the vibrations then the roof opening up to welcome you into the ethers idea. Your excellent images had me elevating into the galaxies to become one with the music of the universe. Awesome write! I like this a lot.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 15, 2005

Still Again N Again N Again Without Dreams You Will Only See Those Overwhelming Stars In Hollyweird-California_

Makes People Think Thoughts!

TRASK

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 15, 2005

Your words are like music...

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 15, 2005

I can just imagine "tuning up with the stars" and having the privilege of playing music with them. This is awesome, Jude. Right up my alley of thinking. Thank you for sharing this poetic offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 15, 2005

Sounds like a trip I would like to go on :-) Have you ever had the experience of hearing music while you are writing poetry and then realizing it is in your mind because there is no music on?

I can relate to this dream very strongly.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 15, 2005

Wonderful thought and wonderful write almost as good as the symphony of words that you are forever playing for us.

Felix