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Luminosity
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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Once more I walk into your dreams
Aim myself into the filament of your thoughts

And wonder what becomes of light
When it is surrounded by radiance

And wonder what to do
When the sun fades into the background

And your eyes fill the room
And your dreams reveal their luminosity

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 Reviews of "Luminosity"
Reviewed by April Smith (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2005
Wow. Just wow. I love this. It's beautiful and melodious and definitely "illuminating". :-) April

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 17, 2005
Brilliant. I see the light.

Ron

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on August 17, 2005
Marvelous Jude!

peace, Carole

Reviewed on August 16, 2005
Gosh! This one is like magic! Robert, this is EXCELLENT!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 16, 2005
Well Penned ..Robert
excellent write
Passion dwells within the eyes

William ......Peace




Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 16, 2005
... I wonder if moths think the same when they can't help but fly into the flame? I've always wondered what they were doin! What a perfect little gem of a write this is: so delicate and tender but as penetrating and invasive as light itself. The idea of light being wrapped in radiance captures the idea of the heavenly vision splendidly and I love the way you enable us to see the relativity through imagery of light beyond what is already created and thus imagineable: a perception of the Divine. Chanti is spot on, too... it is those IN the light who have the ability to assess the degrees and variousness of source, power shade and tone. Metaphysical romance at its best, Jude, thank you. LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on August 16, 2005
enjoyed the radiance

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2005
This is beautiful, I was expecting something as complex as you usually write, this is very pure, refreshing and.... shall I say,....LUMINOUS:)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 16, 2005
emotional questioning of love and what it can do to one's mind and heart.

Felix

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 16, 2005
Those must be extremely powerful eyes, Jude.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 16, 2005
Get lost in them.....lol :)!!

Stunning work my friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on August 16, 2005
Your words radiate love, light and wonder! Splendid offering, Robert!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2005
Mind melding again?

Filament-radiance-luminosity.

Cleverly used: With your sensitive use of your subtle craftsman poetic skills..

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on August 16, 2005
Drink it in, Jude. There are no more precious moments than those where the souls bond within the light of the spirit. Such a beautiful write from an enlightened being.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on August 16, 2005
Another lovely poem! You have a way with words!

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on August 16, 2005
The radiance is a reflection of your own. Illuminating words from an illuminated soul.
Take care... Chanti

Reviewed by Leah Wilson
Reviewed on August 16, 2005
Splendid! Where do you get these beautiful words? I am always astounded at your thought processes. Phrases like "wonder what becomes of light
When it is surrounded by radiance" Such a poet, you are, Jude! Love, Leah

Reviewed on August 16, 2005
So very lovely Jude! This is so softly beautiful, just loved this poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on August 15, 2005
The answer to the question is simply: Dawn.
This one is gently created, softly spoken, lands gently on the waiting heart.
blessin's
cynth'ya

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on August 15, 2005
Lovely, moonchild. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2005
Enjoy the moment :-)

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2005
ah these words....

if my light would shine, if my dreams would flow...

this was excellent

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on August 15, 2005
you're welcome any time - hahaha. really luminous and inspired poem, Jude.

Reviewed by Robert Montesino
Reviewed on August 15, 2005
Oh yea! I can see the power of light in your verse!

Reviewed by Huda Orfali
Reviewed on August 15, 2005
Very beautiful and romantic, Jude
love and peace


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