Perfect! Each wish cascades beautifully into another, form and function coupled triumphantly, perfectly...if only all could come true, then again what more would be left to wish for! Glad to be reading you again!
From beginning to end, I sensed this as if you were a billows, breathing love and inspiration into everyone who takes the time to read this poem. Another truly excellent poem. ~ Sara
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2005
Me too! I love the uplifting feeling I am feeling as I read your work tonight. Suddenly I don't feel so tired.
As for me, I wish what you wish, too! All I can think is "Curl me foetal in white feather of your breath", cos this is the Voice of the Prophet, crying in the wilderness, speaking into the void (which is the noun which really stands apart in this piece and counterbalances the thrust of the message, I think) to "birth" new life and hope in the minds of men. That must be why I feel this is like "seed", curling foetal in your prophetic words... and, of course, being seed, the word will go forth and produce a mighty harvest in hearts and minds to fulfill the vision of unity and end of strife. And, yes, wishes will thus know no boundaries because they have the power of life within them, like the seed, to spread and "be" everything. Makes me feel spiritually "pregnant and swelling" just to even think about these things!! Perhaps it's a good job I'm just off for a week or two's break! :)) I'm beginning to overstep my boundaries, I think! Yep, I'm right there with this one, Jude... slowly oozing, melding and spreading all over the page (so what's new, Kate?!) May heaven graciously water and nourish this bountiful prophetic seed. TY LOL Korny Kate xx
So do I Jude, and thnx for sharing. Also, thank you so much for you review of "My Stark Reality." I really appreciated those kind words. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, &((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your sad little den sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2005
Jude you have created an exceptional beauty of true love for all!
This is precious and I have to say ; 'i LOVE IT ,,...LOVE IT!
Excellent!!!
Peace and joyfilled life to you and yours',
Love this! Once again you get below the suface with your wonderful way with words. I just recieved your book! I love the outlay and the picture, and I can't wait to start reading the poems and sharing them with others! Luv it, Jeanette.
You filled our hearts with hope and made us develop a desire to be optimistic despite living in a chaotic world. Excellent and very inspiring poem
Abdi-Noor
How inspired and uplifting is this.
These words hold power.
These words prove how much mightier the pen is than the gun!
These words are a healing balm in for cell of the body.
First, it should be pointed out that the word 'wish' has long been associated with worth, dignity, and the fulfillment of humankind. It is worthwhile to examine the basis of this poem. This affirms truth in thought, speech, and deed and it is sturdy with devotion and with an open mindedness of spiritual wisdom. Something of this caliber can only be written by a philosophical mystic. This gives me a wishful, warm feeling Jude and I thank you.
'Inside every moment of wonder - Is a desire to share its splendor ... With the power to end - All pain and suffering - By becoming one with each other ... A will to be alive within everything...'! Yes, yes! A beautiful poem Jude! Love Suzie xox :-)
your work is always so finely and subtly crafted andm this one is no
exception i especially like the structure of the first nine lines and the way it changes at line ten without calling attention to itsef.
i too like the imag of the breath of light -- stunning
In every one of your poems I always find at least one line which sums up the entire piece. In this one is "a breath of light". Light relates to life, illumination, enlightenment, discovery, and revelation; breathing light is symbolic of birth -- perhaps the birth of spiritual unity.
To feel as big and as small as we are...is so well expressed within your verse, Jude. Written from a heart that truly knows love and understands that no matter how much love we give away, we always have 100%. Sharing love is like casting bread upon the water, it comes back to us 10 fold. Beautiful and uplifting write, thank you.
Take care,
Sherry
sometimes you seem a poet larger than life, Jude, and a poem about wishes without boundaries suits that image. but your generosity and your compassion toward every living thing is reflected equally well here. I wish it too. Dawn
Inside each wish I wish that the world had more wishers like you! The gift of your beautiful mind speaks in this poem with a voice of tender passion for the betterment of life, an endearing poem from the heart and soul of one who cares for all humanity!
A poem of wonder;-)
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~Nikki~
Ron
(Inside every soul there grows
A will to be alive within everything
And for our wishes to know no boundaries)
Regis
Calvin
love and peace, Carole
TRASK
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
This is precious and I have to say ; 'i LOVE IT ,,...LOVE IT!
Excellent!!!
Peace and joyfilled life to you and yours',
Rich Criso
"Inside Each Wish I Wish" is an inspiring striker insider.
Wise lines delivering a wise messege.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Felix
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Abdi-Noor
William ......Peace
These words hold power.
These words prove how much mightier the pen is than the gun!
These words are a healing balm in for cell of the body.
Sage
Thank you dear POET for sharing your brilliance!!
Love Tinka
exception i especially like the structure of the first nine lines and the way it changes at line ten without calling attention to itsef.
i too like the imag of the breath of light -- stunning
goo write
john+
Is a breath of light"
In every one of your poems I always find at least one line which sums up the entire piece. In this one is "a breath of light". Light relates to life, illumination, enlightenment, discovery, and revelation; breathing light is symbolic of birth -- perhaps the birth of spiritual unity.
Carmen :-)
Take care,
Sherry
A poem of wonder;-)
Love,
Eileen
Great work, fantastic poem, and sincereity felt throughout
thanks for sharing this message of hope, Jude
thanks for your wishes