Inside You (2) (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2006

perfect!

saved

vesna

Reviewed on January 18, 2006

Jude,

This is absolutely stunning; not only your words, but the life
and motion emanating through them!

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on January 18, 2006

Is this only beautiful and romantic - or maybe a little more? I tend for the second possibility and hope this won't affend you.
Can't wait to read No. 3.
Amira

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on January 13, 2006

You have taken my breath away with this glorious feast of delicious description! Bravo, Robert, bravo!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 9, 2006

... Think you'd have difficulty squeezing into my jeans, Jude, but you can share my lipstick anytime! :)) Well, what did you expect? Something sensible??!! Your orgastic spiritual/sensual combos are guaranteed to frazzle the mind and the matter... does this mean we're going to get a (3)... (4), (5) and (6)?? Meltdown By Numbers... Queue Nordette's visual... K xx

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

This one soars to a new height. The ability to connect to any dimension with another individual must be a wonderful thing.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

Wow...I am hot all over just from reading this passionate write.
Wow again!
Best wishes always to you and yours
from
kay.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

You have x-ray vision. I need those glasses. Beautiful thoughts.

Ron

Reviewed by Robin Labenberg

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

Tugs on the heart strings..I love I can connect to any dimension
and grow into the passion of the sunset..You have found your soulmate and told about it beautifully!

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on January 8, 2006

Dear Jude,

When one reaches the pinnacle, the uniting of souls that dance in unison, you then know all there is to know, a stunning composition that reflects all the beauty and love.

Thank you for sharing Jude.
Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

Excellent writing Jude...

Carole...love and peace

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

Love the passion in this write!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

I'm saving this one, Jude. Some of us can only dream of this type of relationship. If this poem is about your relationship with your lover, then both of you are blessed above measure. Parts of it reminded me of the Trip Enough for You collab. :-) Not that it's written like it, but the sense of having an emotionally and spiritually fullfilling relationship is what strikes me as similar. A rare thing indeed. (For other readers: Yes, Jude and I did the collab, but it was strictly poetic speaking. *smile* I've never met The Shaman in person. I had to clear that up, Jude, so your other female fans won't send me pitchforks in their thoughts or you either, sir. Hehehe.) ~~Nordette aka Frillie the Dragon

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

One of your best, Ace! Just the true willingness to get "inside" another is a blessing which few will ever realize.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

This "you" of whom you write is a gateway to "heaven," Jude. Thank you for sharing the beauty. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

Passionate and romantic piece. Well done!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

This is the beauty of solid romance, Jude. You and Lisa are on the same page with your writes, bringing some honey-sweetness into my morning fog. It is a blessing to have a person who opens all doors for us and presents with no barriers around their heart making it so easy to fall into the dream with them. Excellent poeming!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

Sweet Jude and a tribute to this person beyond compare, she or he is a lucky person to have you to write about her.

Felix

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

Your spirituality shines in this write, Jude.

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

Inside you, robert jude forese, is a magic power that, while every willing and worthy human can tap, is growing and evolving
at exceptional speed. The love you dare to love is feeding and watering it and seeing that it gets plenty of light. Speaking gently to it and touching it just the right amount. Witness results such as this poem. Witness the love that you make so vivid. W o w

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

I agree with Philip below in entirety, very deep and spiritual as poetry should really be !
The You becomes I in reverse psychology as we discover ourselves and our Glorious Maker in the entities of others !
Peter

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

Simple yet extremely deep. Poetry as poetry should be.

Reviewed by Jennifer Butler (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

Very nice.

Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

wonderfully penned and enjoyed.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

I can hear the explosions I think you've ignited already.:)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 7, 2006

Wow this is utterly beautiful....you go MAN!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on January 6, 2006

Wow! This poem literally vibrates with amazing spiritual clarity!
Another sublime write, Jude; our gain that you just keep them coming. Bravo, bravo!
Peace,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on January 6, 2006

This is such a strong, sensual, spiritual, enticing and most beautiful write. But then again, everything you write follows that flow.

blessin's, let me know when you're ready to be heard big time on PowerTalk,
cynth'ya

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on January 6, 2006

This is spiritual coitus! A real p e n e t r a t o r! When the length is the phallic link to the womb which does contour around the physical tube of flesh, the merging of two souls of moods in motion dance on the inches scale at the bottom of the blueprint to infinity giving dimension to cartography and topographical contours of creation uniting at the marbled jagged summit with a kiss of deep relief!

Sage

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on January 6, 2006

The merging of two souls into one is true communion as well as a lei in the storm of this world. A beauty, Jude...Lin

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on January 6, 2006

I think it is love at its highest when we can allow ourselves to see through and from another's vision without fear of losing our own. Jude, you've left me pondering again.

Carmen :-)