That was beautiful...simple...poetic...a passionate experience.

Dear Jude,

Often much is said with so little... sometimes nothing need be said at all. An outstanding offering Jude.

warm hugs
Elga

Such an alignment is truly a gift. Thank you for sharing this offering, Jude. Love and peace,

Regis

Beautifully said Jude!

Carole...love and peace to you

A very potent write, Jude. A lot of draw for so few lines. Excellent work, even better than your usual offerings.
Take care,
Sherry

Short and sweet Robert, nice smile on your bio, it's catching

Okay, I like this poem. And I'm not scared, Jude. I'll say it...dayumn that's a hot bio picture! ;-)

Splendid! Need I say more? LOL!

No one maligned.

Ron

Two people touching souls is a beautiful thing!

Love & Light,
Joseph

I never see the fire in their eyes. It normally comes from out of their mouth. And boy do I get burned.

A most divine prime..

Okay then! Well said, Jude. Sparce perfection!
Blessings,
Carolyn

Tiny bit of heaven. . ."primed" is postively inspired! "...aligned with the contour of her soul," like, w o w. 'Pea' <3

Jude,

I think the brevity in this adds to its intensity. I love the last two lines, quite an impact!

Wow! I don't know how to say this, but, this is one of your best ever. You wasted no words in conveying a delightful sensation. ~ Sara

Really Romantic!

TRASK

Nice to have a go0d alignment in order..

A most beautiful and economical moody piece that is glorious in its simplicity. Extraordinarily commanding and self-assured, and, at the same time, yielded and graciously sensitive; such "relaxed comfortableness" seeming to arise out of a position of true emotional intimacy between those so engaged. Aligned it most certainly is - as opposed to the more usually ambiguously self-reflexive or oblique lines you pen. And face-to-face contact as opposed to the more "inclusive", one-or-many angles I am usually able to find in your work. If Fertile Surface was sticky toffee, this has now become hard candy; you obviously have quite a sweet tooth! You said you had "some ideas" but you didn't say you were thinkin of takin up a missionary position! :)) A potent and penetrating write and no mistake, Jude! Reckon you've bin on the multi-vits lately... doubt if anyone can sleep after this; poor Elizabeth must be exhausted!! (Brit-humour, OK!!) :)) LOL K xx

Passion at its heights! Great write. Then again if one was to read this on a spiritual level........What an awakening! ;-)

You don't leave much to the imagination, do you...? ed

Sensual and emotional write.

That fire does reveal a lot at times. WTG Ace

Excellent work!!

Stay tuned Jude!!

Love Tinka

A sweet, passionate and spiritual alignment of the highest degree !
Peter

A wonderful moment.

Lucky Star Sandie May Angel :o)

Very nice indeed
Perfection in every sense

I think you have outdid yourself in this poem as it touches on the very core of the sexual united with love aspect of relationships. There is one thing tohave lust but when it manages to unite and grow with intensity then it is fireworks indeed.
Felix

Sweet! You read emotions expertly and that is what we need to do first lest we jump on an empty cart.
Abdi-Noor

Oh my, this is smooth. Like the old-time pumps that had to be primed by first pouring water down the pipe before water would pump out of the spigot. Damn, Jude this is pumped! I hope she remembers the alignment and her readiness at dawn! Blessed Be.

Sage

Ha! You can't sleep either, Robert.

This is beautiful... did you aligned...more than once?

Smooch...

Elizabeth