Warm and sensual a pleasure to read

Nice come to climax, Jude.

Ron

Impassioned and seductive..sorry I happened to look down and saw Sage talking about rubber snakes and it....

And the continuous glow of an inate talent for poetry to delight the mind and thus the senses... sensed continuously. A ticklish delight!
(LOL at Sage's descriptions of poems!Gotta love it!)
Love&Light*
Alexandra*

That whispering poetry into the ear thing really does it for you, huh? ;-) ~~Nordette

This is a good poem. I have read poems that have ranged from foam rubber snakes on a wire leash to a chrome-plated siren whistle and dog collar ... but this one is the erotic art of the RJF medallion of our lead poet.

Sage

This is love in its purest level.

Carmen

As your eyes purge my thoughts
I become free of my flesh
And my arms effortlessly merge into your pulse

That is dynamic love at the spiritual level. It can never be forced, or bettered...

A nice mergence of flesh and spirit. This poem leaves a warm glow, Ace.

Love & Light,
Joseph

You show your love of poetry and women in this dynamic Valentine Day composition !
Smouldering with superior romance and passion
I have to laugh at Felix's comments below, he's hit the nail on the head !
Peter

Blimey... this has all the intensity of Genesis, Jude; "and God spoke and said 'Let there be...'". The Dawn/Birth of the Word in Biblical, but also in human poetic terms. And this just IS so deliciously coooool and smooth; like being entranced by the vigour, beauty and excitement of an electrical storm behind the silence and safety of glass. Cocoon-like. This "light of life" explodes with all the liquid energy of the River Euphrates, the River of Life, in fact - metaphorically speaking. The rhymes and rhythms are natural and effortlessly pulsing in time with the images. Altogether a sensuous and melting slow-burn of a write that draws you in deeper like a moth to the flame, with all the scents and sensations of molten wax against skin. Gorgeously tallow! Had to smile at your first line: year or ear?? If you were rolling in a haystack in Somerset, it would probably be both!! :)) Just love it! TY Kate xx

The heat of the night leaves you breathless!!

Love Tinka

Very relaxing mood set with this fine prose Jude. Made me want to jet off to some south sea island with a lover and a pina colada.

Felix

Better keep ahold of that heat, as you will be catching some of the snow coming up the coast tomorrow too...ed

The heat in this one goes beyond! Leaving me breathless with enjoyment :-)

"Oh the vapors" Romantic and enticing and just in time for Valentine's Day, too!! This is a very seductive and delicious write.
Take care,
Sherry

You know good and well what you're doing to all of those women on ad. I'm c-c-c-certainly g-g-glad I'm n-n-ot affected in any way :>)

Jude,

Siggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Poetry like this will make a woman swoon. Catch me...I'm in looooove! Seriously, a wonderfully written, beautiful poem. That first stanza...WHOO! And it didn't let up--thank you, Poet!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.