Dark Ripples (haiku) (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on February 21, 2006

Nice, very nice.
Carolyn

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on February 16, 2006

Brevity at it's best, excellent Ku.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2006

I feel like the pebble in a mind somewhere..

Vesna:)

Reviewed by Lisa Koosis (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2006

Beautiful imagery and so much said in so few words. Beatifully done.

Lisa

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino

Reviewed on February 14, 2006

Jude,

Loquacious in its brevity as ever you are..

Peace,

B

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on February 13, 2006

Cerebral wandering vampiric!

Sage

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on February 13, 2006

It breathes so peacefully. That's all I gotta say.
blessin's Bro Jude,
cynth'ya

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on February 13, 2006

ku ku ka choo
tried to keep my review brief
not to over shadow you.

peace, love & understanding
~ sara

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on February 13, 2006

Y E S !!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 13, 2006

This is deep and thought-provoking. There are so many of us who can relate to this moment of darkness, and the thoughts that came with it.-

Like a still pond, undisturbed by the wind.
Suddenly, met with a drop of water.
Awakened by series of ripples,
reaching out -
each containing its own memories.

~ Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 13, 2006

Ever since Kate saw me in black..I dunno...

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 13, 2006

Veils are gorgeous things in the way they both shield and protect... and seduce and tantalise. Thoughts can be equally as mysterious, the same thought meaning so many differing things depending on the time, place and mood. The cause of the ripple and the passage of water are intrinsic in determing the nature of the veil. And blame this obtuse review on the piece of music I'm currently listening to... If I was listening to The Grateful Dead I would be saying something entirely different! And you look good as one of the Men In Black! Kool Ku, Jude. TY Kate xx :))

Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on February 13, 2006

ripples do indeed expose those things that once were hidden. enjoyed this very much.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on February 13, 2006

Evocative ku, Jude. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on February 13, 2006

Such depth and beauty, Jude.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 13, 2006

This is a wonerful ku with deep currents of meaning flowing from it expressing the subliminal thoughts of the Writer. Well done Jude.
felix