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Aging Inside Your Words
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Your words are like stars
Dancing across the cool night sky
Seducing me with brilliance
Touching me with light

Your words are more than breath
Or ink across a page
They are a creative bascule of imaginings

Like a see-saw
With me on one end
And you on the other

Balancing each other out
Eye to eye

Your words are like sustenance
Nourishing my worn and tired form

They revitalize my life
And pull me out from the storm
And clear the dust from my eyes
And define the movement of the clouds

Your words are whisperings of hope and truth
And shout to my heart

Rekindle my youth

As I age
Inside your words
     

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 Reviews of "Aging Inside Your Words"
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on June 7, 2006
...truly beautiful work, Jude...thank you.

Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on May 27, 2006
Excellent and inspiring prose; I just love the words. Thanks to you, aging is beautiful!

Reviewed on May 22, 2006
This is gorgeous.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2006
superb work..you never fail
the reader is never left barren..

this is in my library..

Vesna

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
Reviewed on May 18, 2006
Jude.

As ever, you spin your words as a spider spins silk - effortlessly and expertly...

Peace,

B

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 18, 2006
Thought provoking construct. Appreciate the allusions - words as stars, words as sustenance, words as whisperings of something greater than words. What an irony, words producing something greater than themselves in those that read them.
Richard

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on May 18, 2006
Conceptually profound and awesomely executed. AGING INSIDE YOUR WORDS makes one imagaine a voice and the sacred meanings of its private language as a fountain of endless enchantments. Intensely dynamic lines.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 18, 2006
This is such a meaningful tribute and affirmation to the one for whom it is written, Jude. Each verse is most compelling. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 18, 2006
This is vintage, Jude, and, like a fine wine, would be worth waiting for; time bestows its grace and favour and you amply demonstrate that those words that endure are the ones most carefully chosen - and spoken: this is sooo mellow you just GOTTA recite it! :)) It's made for your voice. With shades and hues of other of your writes that I can think of, this brings the whole into perfect equilibrium, the culmination of a linguist's life and aspiration, basking in the reflected glory of what he has created. To truly live is to be perpetually inspired on all levels, and this is what you seem to speak of here: being drawn, enlightened, understood, complimented, fed, renewed, redirected, encouraged and ultimately loved. Biblically, the whole of life is initiated, called into being, sustained and upheld by Word. It is timeless and our collective eternal future. Within Word you are indeed forever young... as your namesake Dylan sang all those years ago!! And he's still doin OK inhe?? :)) Reminds me of Burning Brightly... Radiant... Glorious. Circles within circles, I think. Love this, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 18, 2006
Not a bad way to age for sure...thanks for sharing your aging proses with us.......lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on May 18, 2006
Great write. love this line
"as I age inside your words"

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on May 18, 2006
Stunning write Jude.


Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
As your loyal fans have already agreed,
You Rock!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
Why thank you, Jude. LOL. Just kidding.
Beautiful poem for your muse and a treat for us all. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
enjoyed the read

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
A stellar poem Jude! If someone ever said this to me I'd faint with joy;-)

eT

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
Old words don't die, they just oxidize on dusty pages. I thought you were talkng about me, and then I realized you meant her.

A fine one meant for reading.

Ron

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
They say that listening is an art. I think it's one you show here that you have mastered well Ace.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
It's tantamount to watch words at play. I would love to make a word camp under the bough of a fig tree in the tropics and stare up at the night sky and silence the stars to what the shooting star is to the dark of the night with my words to keep us forever young, Jude!

Sage

Reviewed by Alex Nodopaka
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
That's a lovely poem & the repetition of 'and' works really fine.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
This is absolute and articulated beauty within your words.
Susan

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
this is how your words often touch me :-)

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
This is intriguing. I picture every word in the English language swirling around and available to you. Excellent write.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
This is quiet, easy, flowing without effort... as everything in love, should.

- A treasure for those who take this gift with thanks.

-Bill

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
Ahhh!! the one who gets under our skin and touches our soul. This is so beautiful and loving. It touches that place where ony true love can.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Huda Orfali
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
Sheer brilliance
Very beautiful, Jude
thanks for sharing
love and peace

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
The cooing of a lover with words that move the heart is captured in this poem.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
You have captured what it is to read someone who can get inside the mind, heart and soul of a reader. Poetry should be what that is all about and your work is a symbol of that very theory.

Felix

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
Very loving........such a blessing.............
words heal, soothe, inspire........
and touch
as does this poem
breathtaking.........pax A

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
A song!! Heartfelt and beautiful!
"..Aging
Inside your words" Tremendous love for your beloved! :-D

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on May 16, 2006
You are the best Robert...always good.


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