Dream Scene (cc) ... Battle Royal (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

It's amazing how that works...how once you no longer fear, the fear just moves straight through you....and you remain unscathed

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on July 24, 2006

The strength of Dream Scene (cc)...Battle Royal, is in your mane of hair, Jude! Perhaps you are the reincarnation of the equine mount who will guide us with a new blueprint of peace from the skeletal remains of the gray doom of the apocalypse. You have good hold of the reins with this one, Jude...

Sage

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 23, 2006

The battles of dream sleep are the hardest because one cannot consciously affect them. GFood one.

Ron

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on July 22, 2006

Fabulous fantasy. I like the mythological trappings. It reminded me some of classic Greek theater. COOL!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Very interesting dream! and I thought mine where active :-) The colours you are remembering are very powerful colours to have in a dream. I have a feeling your at peace with what death is. Many are not for fear this is there only life. Thanks for the sharing.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Getting charged up with inner horse power... Indains have these type of dreams too..

Though -Battle Royal! MacDonalds have food called something like that.
Hope it's not horse meat...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

I get the feeling that you enjoyed the way you were able to manipulate the outcome of the dream so that you are actually relieved to finally be finished with the worries and horrors
of war! A poem of superb composition!

ET

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Vividly nightmarish, Jude...and technicolor dreams. I would have been writhing and wimpering in my sleep trying hard to make my self wake before the horses plowed through....but the passed through you in your dream...unusual but powerful...definitely worthy of the sweat! Commanding write Jude...awesome imagery...I'm in a panic just reading!
Love,
Taylor

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Sounds like a premonition!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Sounds like a vision of the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse, taken from the book of Revelation.

And yah and amen to what the Reverend Trappernicus quoted below.

It is good though to wake up still sane, and peaceful, after visions like this.

Richard the Intrepid

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

quite the apocolyptic write. guess you're ready. hope it rubs off on the rest of us. Dawn

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

A wonderfully intense and visual write Jude. This conveys a feeling of hope, and moreover, the peace found after the conquest over the demons we all face now and again. Great write.

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

A scary and yet fascinating write! Wonderful penned,
B&R

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

The Bloody Apocalypse, and you feel at peace. Wow. Perhaps we'll all feel better after it's over. A most captivating piece, Robert.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Robert

It sounds like something real bad is about to happen...

Peter

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Dream on, Old Man!! Gotta luv Rev T ... is he any relation to Booker T and the Wotnots?? Well that's bin and gone and dun it... we've incited you to unearth this Treasure Trove and look wot we got... Hounds of the Baskervilles pounding the Gates of Hell bringing out the Macbeth's Hags in all of us... and you just wakin up with an appetite for a good breakfast as usual!! :)) Must be all that Royal Jelly on your table. And, since I'm in this kind of mood, can tell it's Friday without even lookin... You are such a survivor. All this reminds me of a coupla Neil Young songs rolled into one... but maybe that's because there's a swinging weekend folk/rock festival taking place on a farm down the road from here. So I'm cuttin loose to Yasgers (??) with the nearest Southern Man... Apocalypse Later, thanks xx :)) LOL Knightmare Kate xx

Reviewed by M Flack

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Wow is a good word to describe this. And I agree with one other post. I�d be running in the opposite direction if encountered with such a dark and menacing revelation. Though most my dreams these days do seem just as dark and threatening�

It does remind me of a bible quote�

'In the last days, God says, I will pour out my Spirit on all people. Your sons and daughters will prophesy, your young men will see visions, your old men will dream dreams.'

Acts 2:17

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

The Four Horsemen give Jude a visit. Maybe you ought not to eat that cold pizza so late at night. LOL

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Fast moving and an exciting write from you Robert.
Best wishes always to you and yours
from
kay.

Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Reminds me of the book of Revelations....scary dream

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Sounds like a reading from the book of revelations, may not have frightened you brave Jude but would have scared the shit out of me.

lol
fee