Love the descriptions!

Love, full of similies and somilikes.

Ron

I don't smoke Jude, but if I did, I think I might have to light one up after this one.

Have you ever tried digital painting?

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Her skin has the character
Of moonlight in a dream <----- beautiful!

This is beautiful...this is tender and soothing comfort for the heart.You gave this pen a heartbeat.
Susan

Dear Ace,

"Love's Melting Star" is a portrait of both the intrinsic and extrinsic nature of beauty.

Love & Light,
Joseph

this melts right off the page, enjoyed much...thanks for the review on "currents"

Mm-mm... some sweet lip-massage is this, like poetic sherbet fizzing in the mouth and poppin in the eyes and brain! :)) It's silky smoothness also reminds me of the Passion Fruit Panna Cotta I had for desert yesterday. YUMMY!! "Together, sweat is the lotion of creation... In the fever of motion"... as so often in your work, your couplets daisy-up like precious gold links in a chain, rendering a multiplicity of senses and meaning. Reading you is always like gazing into the facets of crystal, colours changing according to humidity, temperature and mood: you truly are Moods In Motion. I like the ambiguity of "Her fingers are like wandering ivy Growing along the contours of his heart"... ivy can be deathly, tenacious and "constricting"... but, on the other hand, it is good if the gentle fingers are working life and circulation into an otherwise tombstone of a heart... Like I say, always a multiplicity of interpretation which teases and delights the mind wonderfully. Jaw-dropping write, Jude, which mesmerises like Aurora Borealis leaving a white-burning tail-light of "ooohs" and "aaaahs" in its wake! :)) TY K xx

Beautiful imagery in this poem....

clearly inspired, this elegant ode to infinite beauty - and passion growing in the Galaxy of Jude. the heat may melt us all before it's over. but that's okay with me. Dawn

You are in love again.

Love it.

Let it live and thrive, whilst ye are alive.
3 score and 10, then out. Amen

Now that's hot! Not to mention seriously beautiful. Not to mention extraordinarily sensuous. Not to mention outright brilliant:-)
Aberjhani

Now this does sound like a wonderful, romantic dream. ~~Nordette

enjoyed the read

Jude

Has a definable ethereal quality about it...

Peter

This is simmering romance at it's very best. I think I need to boil up some of that for myself!! Excellent images, you pulled me right into the moment and made me want to take a trip up to the hot springs today.
Take care,
Sherry

This is a heart-throb of a poetic. I'm visioning, feeling and believing. My best, Gloria

Sounds like a hot-tub filled with passion.
This scenario could heat up real fast Jude!

Lisa

Beautiful, a wonderful flow of words
Love and Peace, B&R

The satin verses of Jude on display yet again . . .

Clever! Jude, how many hearts have you made away with?

Absolutely most outstanding write that ooooozes the body mind and soul!!

Love Tinka

You look towards the heavens Jude and pull the magic of the skies into your poems. They warm the heart and enchance the mind. Thank you.
FEe

Your words are a Galaxy of beauty Robert...outstanding piece.

eeeeeeuuuuuu, this one melts in the mouth,like a crunchie bar( Choc caramel outside with honeycomb inside :):) YUM!
OOOO now I have a craving for one, TA m8
;)Ch'erie

With splendiferous poetry like this, don't blame me if I melt into your star...so edible it's incredible...;-)

Wish I had the ability to write like this...Rufuz (oh yeah, & ed)

High on mango butter! Seductive muse tonight...

Sage

Brilliance, Jude ~~~

Peace & Love, Dove