Oh, the intricacies of You!

Excellent fare, Jude....angel that you are.

Sigh of Light is one of the most-beautiful phrases I've ever heard!

Love, Rhonda

This one speaks of sweet avoidance. The reader is not sure if it is on purpose or just shyness. Probably just a shadow--intriguing.

Ron

Tender light and dark paradoxes here... which, like sleight of hand conjuring tricks, has cast twilight reflections in the minds of your readers as to the Voice's actual viewpoint. My first reading aligned mostly with Sherry's take: a delightful, if not coy, kind of hide-and-seek, like that of the major players in a Shakespearean play; or the silent and unseen adoration at the place of the nightly visitation of a minor deity. Whatever, tis delightful. The thought that comes to me MOST strongly is the image of the breath of light: I see that it is the witholding of that breath which creates the sensation of darkness - and that's another beautiful endorsement of the feeling of awe and wonder. If you consort with Angels, Senor, you will always come away with burning lips! I will have to start calling you Isaiah!! Smokin!! :)) K xx

NEAT!

TRASK

Someone buggeth you :)
Of all the ways to express that emotion, this is choice!!

As only you can do.
Ty for the inspiring...
Ch'erie

Robert, you amaze.

A true romantic potion for love hearts

Each of these syllables shine a magic of poetic intent and soulful honesty that thoroughly delights. Put another way: very cool poem Mr. Forese:-)
Aberjhani

Hmnnn definately unique from your usual writes and if it is an experiment I like the format that you are using. well done old friend.
Fee

I do the same with the tax man..

I can feel the sigh of relief..

This dances on my thoughts as though I am watching a shy boy who is enamored by someone but is not able to come forward and express his desires. Instead, he hides himself in the darkness and absorbs all that she is and once she is gone, he breaths out the intense beauty and light of the day upon which she has graced his path. This still seems like a bit of a voyer write to me, perhaps it is my mood and not your intent at all. Your images really sucked me into this poem, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry

Oh my a sigh of relief....been there done that!!

Love Tinka

Ace

Almost a sigh of relief..
You leave a colossal amount between the lines for the psyche..
The Jude Trademark !!

Peter

Beautiful imagery and emotions in this one Jude wonderful poetry expressed from your pen.

Most interesting, Robert!

very clever!

Susan

Evasive thoughts for sure.

lol

A paradox to ponder...I wonder if after you dispel the darkness with your breath of light,you will find a surprise...

Made me remember ome line I read: Please close the door behind you....succinct and easy flow poem. Victor

This has voyeur written all over it...it's a very lucid, liquid thought of shapeshifting. This courtly voyeuristic shapeshifting coalesces the jungle and the dark alleys of the Bronx, prowling on the outer fringes, interposing shamanism and mysticism Sigh of Light is a mood in motion...

Sage

In your words, you accomplish this very fact beautifully.
Susan

Now this is one of the most orginal writes I have read. It could be taken on the dark or the light side..........;-)

On the dark side........I hope you never feel this way about me.

On the light side............what a wonderful compliment that would be!

In other words.......Great write!

Deal...e