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Frolicking in Forbidden Fruit
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Under the shade of a large oak tree
Autumn leaves gently dance down
All around our bodies

Covering a blanket
With a magnificent array
Of colorful shapes and colors

I reach over to a bowl of fruit
And offer you an apple

As you bite into shinny red surface
The lusciously crisp sound
Of its juicy essence
Echoes from within your salacious smile

I joke this scene reminds me
Of the Garden of Eden
When Eve offers Adam
A taste of the forbidden fruit

And you jest,
“Well we’re sitting beside the Tree of Knowledge.
Do you think a serpent is waiting
In the bush?”

Beaming I say,
“Well, I don’t know if the serpent is really all that clever
But when its body stretches out,
I’m sure that’s precisely where he’ll be”

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 Reviews of "Frolicking in Forbidden Fruit"
Reviewed by Blue Sleighty
Reviewed on November 26, 2006
That was smokin'!

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on November 19, 2006
fun read thanks

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2006
Very cute. Holly

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on October 11, 2006
Entertainingly naughty, this is full of the excitement of the first physical exploration of an intriguing and provocative friend.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Brett Moore
Reviewed on October 10, 2006
This kicks ass. Enough said.

Reviewed by Little Miss Aki (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
*snicker* well done.

~Lady Akania

Reviewed on October 9, 2006
Splendid job. Excellent and quite metaphorical

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on October 8, 2006
Awesome write, well done.

Reviewed on October 8, 2006
Outstanding Jude, this is excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on October 8, 2006
Naughty, naughty. Naughty. ROFL. Oh, memories of you. ;-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2006
You would be an interesting person to sit by! Love the feelings of this poem.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on October 8, 2006
Robert

A very fine metaphorical and tongue in cheek poem, that alludes to " All is Possible "...;-)

Watch this Space...

Peter

Reviewed on October 8, 2006
hummm what ? An apple and snake again. <smiling> Mikii

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on October 8, 2006
LOL...and a good frolick that snake will do, too! If you think about it, even the apple can be metaphor for a knob or a pearl. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 8, 2006
I'll shinny up that apple any day.

Ron

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2006
Hmmmm....H P

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 8, 2006
Naughty you....I thought there was a wicked twist somewhere...but nice to read!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 8, 2006
Good write with a great comedic ending with that little twist of humour. Love it.

fee

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on October 8, 2006
Naughty Boy Jude, did you not know how dangerous the one eyed python is...
To women!!
The damage is irreversible! I know, I had six sproggs in honour of this wicked creature ROFLMBO.
;)Ch'erie

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
Brilliantly written piece of interest! Flowed superbly to the centre..
Love the light-heartedness. :-D

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
This is not your usual style, but I enjoyed its humor. Victor

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
Oh what a delight when the wondrous wily Jude comes out to play at night;-) what's that saying?"a bird in the hand is worth two in the bush." Enjoyed this change of pace from you! We both have serpents on our minds tonight;-)though mine differs from yours...lol

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
very clever! (:

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
Hee, hee, Go0d one Robert....

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
The Garden of Erect and the One-Eyed Snake!

Sage

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
Robert,
This one shows your witty romantic side. wonderful expression....
Joselyn

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
Oooooooo!! This ones tasty!!

Xxx dove

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
lol what a tease!

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
Fantastically naughty Robert.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
well done


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