Which Came First? (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 14, 2006

Chilling, but my answer to the question in the title was "chicken." LOL Sorry, this is effectively penned Hallow'een poetry. Brrrrrrrr!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Cleverly created, timely and a great Halloween offering, Jude. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on October 10, 2006

A rare rhyming wicked little forked tail. Wished I'd rote myself!

Ron

Reviewed by Steve Ralph

Reviewed on October 10, 2006

Now this is pure Magic,
very well written and very amusing.
thank you for sharing it.
Steve

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

OH
a couple of charmers
enjoyed your rhyme........and your halloween laugh

ooooooooohaaahaaaaaaaaa

too cute!

Reviewed by Little Miss Aki (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

This made me giggle, wonderous truly.

~Lady Akania

Reviewed by Henry Lefevre

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

I like it, I like it. This is perfect for October 31 and Hallowe'en.

Hank

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

Lol, i think this is my favorite of yours, I like the light and humorous side of you!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

loved the humor and magic word plays..nice levitation

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

Now this is truly bewitching!!

Love it!

Well done!!

vesna

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

Which witch is which? I love the wordplay and the visions of spunk, incantations and plain old hoodoo for all hallows eve.
Susan

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

LOL crafted very well and with wit....:)

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

Oh LOL! Hypnotic hoverings, druids dancing, sexual shenanigns and one incredibly talented warlock! Just superb! Panda :)

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

Perfect for an adult Halloween! Great rhyme and as always made me smile!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

I love it! Very origianal and your sense of humour bursts through in this one Jude. Well done.

Fee

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

hahahaha which wicked witch cam first???

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

Warlock carved a smile on witch's face...More where that came from!

Sage

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

Now that is the most original haloween poem I've ever read. Victor

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

Wonderful write, Jude!!!!! The last line was indeed very special!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

oooooweeeeeee. Got to keep our eyes on you. Delightful. <smiling> <Mikii>

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

Very good Robert
Befitting the coming of the Hallow's Eve
Enjoyable reading
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

well done

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

Apparently I am not the only one that likes to entertain at this time of the year ;-)

Loved this write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

What a charmer that warlock was;-) A sorcerer too I'll bet. And the witch had to be in shock to get such a.... ;-) well anyway a very bewitching tale...love your sense of humor in this,and the rhythm and rhyme...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

ROFL...love it!

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

I have never heard you rhyme in couplets before Robert. Of course I've only been here five months so that's not saying much. The last stanza is a great play on words.

This was delightful ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

Andy's so funny. But my, my, what's gotten into you? ;-) Two duzies in a row. Hmmm. Boo! ~~Nordette

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

LOL!!!Great humor here, Jude, this is really a special "piece."
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

Hey Jude this is too cool!!! This totaly is awesome..I see your geared up for the festives, ha?? On the 31st.. It's coming up..I see you partying already--Thanks for this write----And Happy Hallows Eve!!

Xxx dove

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

what a gentleman he was! (:

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

The one with the less control. So it would be her, but if she was a gem it could be him, but maybe together if well suited...