I am thankful for the gift of life
For the wonder of dreaming
For the light deep inside
I am thankful for the breeze
Scattering leaves through the air
Especially the colorful ones
Descending onto your hair
I am thankful for the smiles and even the tears
For the moments of silence
And the sound of your sparkle
Breathing in my air
When I am overwhelmed
With the crisis of this world
I am thankful how you laugh
And how your eyes erase all my cares
When I am subjected to hostile vibes
And with surroundings leaving me out of place
I am thankful for the peace I see within your face
When I am moody and feeling all alone
I am thankful how you remind me
How much we have grown
I am thankful to share the space within our hearts
But most of all I am truly thankful
When the time comes and we pass away
We will not depart
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Reviewed by Rene' Shazer (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2006
Dear robert,
I would say I am wordless to explain how grateful I am to have read Giving Thanks, Misplaced Longings and Face on an Arctic Sea, but that would be a very bad thing for a writer. These works both speak to me on such a personal level - I know the people of whom you write. Fantastic words put together in a magnificent manner. Hmm, I'm still not hitting on what I mean, but will work on it. Thank you....yea, maybe that's it....thanks....
So beautifully meditative and the tone and register are set from the very first breath of the title. Fitting that your thoughts are here recorded for us in rhyme, both internal and end and you have gone for a less-pruned, more leafy-effect: Fullsome, like Harvest! Wonderful interleaving of seeming generalities and specifics; all-embracing and particular. Love the harmonies of the all-encompassing reverberating with the inner life and tension of the intensely personal. All life is here: the small matter and the big stuff. Such acute observation and care in the way life is lived makes for an accumulation of fully-experienced and appreciated moments and a life in which nothing is lost. The strength of these kinds of receipts comes from a place of inner conviction, and will not be shaken irrespective of external circumstances. The intimacy suggested also reminds me of the reassuring tone of Queries of the Heart. Thank you, Jude... On a flip note, I have had that golden oldie by Sonny and Cher running through my head all weekend: I Got You Babe... Kinda reminds... "So don't let them say your hair's too long... Well I don't care, with you I can't do wrong!" :)) A steady, anchored write... like a light calling ships home to safe harbour. Desiderata, K xx
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2006
I am keeping this one I am thankful I was blessed to read. happy Thanksgiving to you and yours.
Reviewed by S J (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2006
Robert,
There is true beauty in your words, which touches ones soul!
Thank you, for sharing this lovely, spiritual, piece!
Wishing you, and yours, a joyous Thanksgiving ~
Thank you,
Sheila
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2006
Tender and touching ...lovely sentiments. Panda :)
I am thankful for eyes which can still see and read this beautiful and thoughtful work of art. I bow to your pen and shared gratitude which too many take the time to express. May I join you in giving thanks. PLB&G for caring and sharing. <Mikii>
T h a n k Y O U, robert Jude Forese. I, too, have much to be
grateful for. Not the least of my blessings being your
original and intelligent and passionate contributions via the Den.
T h a n k Y O U, too, for your support. T h a n k Y O U for sharing samples of the creations that flow from you as naturally as sunshine and rain. T h a n k Y O U for this deeply sincere and carefully-crafted psalm. Psalm just came to me, and I feel it
fits. MANY, MANY, MANY HAPPY THANKSGIVINGS TO YOU AND YOUR LOVE ! 'Pea' <3
Many gems you have mentioned in this wonderful poem on the many reasons you have to be Thankful....I am thankful that you shared this with us and I am also thankful for all the support that you have given to my poetry over the past few years,you are definitely one of my favorite poets.I hope your Thanksgiving day is perfect Robert,for you and yours.
Best wishes always
from
Kay.
Loving words returning, to the lovings of your life~
and to top it off, from your top line..."I am thankful for the gift of Life...", and it is so obvious you have reasons!
Love and Peace, Jude~
Kimmy~
There is so much for us each to be thankful for if we just open our eyes and our hearts and allow ourselves to recognize our blessings. It is a shame that any of us can find reason to complain when we have been blessed with being born in this free and wonderful country where opportunity abounds, but somehow, we each find reason for sadness and at times find ourselves unable to realize our dreams. To find joy in the simple things in life, to feel blessed by all that has been granted to us and to share what we can, is what the spirit of Thanksgiving is all about...now pass me a drumstick, please, and how about some mashed potatoes and gravy...;)~~ Wonderful and inspired poem. Happy Thanksgiving, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2006
Man this takes me back, we used to sing a hymn in the convent that i've not heard since, but this is your lucky day, cos it kinda went....
1,2,3,,Thank you for all my friends and brothers.
Thank you for all the folk that live.
Thank you for even greatest enemies
I can forgive.
Thank you for many little sorrows.
Thank you for ev'ry helping hand.
Thank you for everywhere your guidance
reaches every land.
Thank you, I see your word has meaning.
Thank you, I know your spirit's here.
Thank you because you love all people,
those both far and near.
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
I would say I am wordless to explain how grateful I am to have read Giving Thanks, Misplaced Longings and Face on an Arctic Sea, but that would be a very bad thing for a writer. These works both speak to me on such a personal level - I know the people of whom you write. Fantastic words put together in a magnificent manner. Hmm, I'm still not hitting on what I mean, but will work on it. Thank you....yea, maybe that's it....thanks....
God Bless
Lena
When the time comes and we pass away
We will not depart"
Superb sentiments, Jude. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Ron
Carmen :-)
Sage
There is true beauty in your words, which touches ones soul!
Thank you, for sharing this lovely, spiritual, piece!
Wishing you, and yours, a joyous Thanksgiving ~
Thank you,
Sheila
Love Tinka
Some things never pass away...and one of them is Eternal Love
You are a poet who captures the divine romance perfectly..
Peter
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Carole
grateful for. Not the least of my blessings being your
original and intelligent and passionate contributions via the Den.
T h a n k Y O U, too, for your support. T h a n k Y O U for sharing samples of the creations that flow from you as naturally as sunshine and rain. T h a n k Y O U for this deeply sincere and carefully-crafted psalm. Psalm just came to me, and I feel it
fits. MANY, MANY, MANY HAPPY THANKSGIVINGS TO YOU AND YOUR LOVE ! 'Pea' <3
with simply compassion; a good spirit or energy
peace
- Bill
Best wishes always
from
Kay.
and to top it off, from your top line..."I am thankful for the gift of Life...", and it is so obvious you have reasons!
Love and Peace, Jude~
Kimmy~
I am thankful for being here tonight.
peace be with you
William
Fee
Love and peace,
Susan
Take care,
Sherry
1,2,3,,Thank you for all my friends and brothers.
Thank you for all the folk that live.
Thank you for even greatest enemies
I can forgive.
Thank you for many little sorrows.
Thank you for ev'ry helping hand.
Thank you for everywhere your guidance
reaches every land.
Thank you, I see your word has meaning.
Thank you, I know your spirit's here.
Thank you because you love all people,
those both far and near.
A precious poem of thanks!
Love, Suzie :-D
Love,
CJ
Allen