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Another Revolution Around the Sun (2)
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So yet, another revolution around the sun

Another war, battle and pampas of genocide
Another round of hate and prejudice
Another bomb of mass destruction
Another dream lost its way
Another son missing on mountain hillsides
Another cycle of melting icecaps
Another zealot, preacher and imprudent leader
Another politician to bite the dust
Another family of heartache, blood and tears
Another father dead in shadows of the hood
Another daughter battered and bruised
Another wife strung out on meth
Another child without a home

Another chance to envision a future
Another opportunity to relinquish the odium of distrust
Another caretaker to assist in healing
Another volunteer to feed the hungry
Another remedy to heal the ill
Another dreamer to articulate the homeland
Another shaman to shape the void
Another door leading to hope
Another window opened to honesty
Another juncture to seek clarification
Another whisper roaring with truth
Another vision to see beyond the stars
Another poem balanced with life
   

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 Reviews of "Another Revolution Around the Sun (2)"
Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on January 10, 2007
A marvelous work of literary precision and ideological depth. The first half of ANOTHER REVOLUTION AROUND THE SUN forces the reader to confront the seemingly unavoidable challenges of violent modern-day confusions and delusions--while the second heroically provides "vision to see beyond the stars." The kind of literary art that adds quantities of value to one's outlook on life as the journey around the sun continues.

Aberjhani

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on January 8, 2007
I really like the contrasts you wrote about. It is a poem balanced about life........M

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 6, 2007
Ying and yang. On the whole, I'm optimistic that we will realize our narcissism and drastically cut our population.



Ron

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on January 6, 2007
I am never disappointed when reading your work -- this is wonderful, Robert, and befitting the arrival of yet another new year.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed on January 3, 2007
another great creation

Reviewed by Rene' Shazer (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2007
Thank you for stating the truth and ending with hope.....

Reviewed on December 31, 2006
Good, bad, or another-ways, I do hope we're around for many more :o)

Have a Happy 2007, Jude.

Micke

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on December 31, 2006
As I read this on the afternoon of New Year's Eve, I really have to stop and think of the devastation contrasted with the hope for the world and wonder just where I play even the tiniest part in all of this. Kinda freaks me out as I sit and muse over poetry when young men are risking their lives in Iraq...a returnee has graced my home over the last few days. Auld Lang Syne seems a redundant and needless approach, but maybe I should think again...listen to new lyrics and a new tune, and tlk a lesson for the old ones. I think I have a head start on it...even if my offerings are small.

Wow Jude, you forever keep me thinking and digging into my heart and my brain for answers.

Happy New Year!
Love,
Taylor xo

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 31, 2006
I do appreciate the way you balanced your thoughts in this poem, Jude. Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing this gift. Happy New Year to you,

Regis



Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on December 31, 2006
Your poem conveys what has happened in the year 2006
And I hope and prayed for 2007 to bring us peace, it is easy to Understand, nice usage of rhymes. The words flowed
Love The tone and rhythm Excellent !!
Wishing you and your family a very Happy New Year!!
Morning Star

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
Excellent write smooth cadence
enjoyed
Peace be with you

Happy New Year
William

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
good contrasts--it's the world, isn't it? thanks for sharing

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
Great write,Happy New Years...Hugs

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
I like the frankness and honesty of each line. It is hard to believe that there is so much suffering going on in this world, despite all our so called "Progress." I like the balance you create with the structure and ending with visions of hope. "Another whisper roaring with truth" is an ingenius and effective use of oxymoron.
Have a safe and Happy New Year!
~Butch

Reviewed by S J (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
This is powerful, profound, and momentous! Your words speak volumes, Robert.

Superbly written!

Happy New Year ~

Thank you,
Sheila

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
What a brilliant summation, as so typical of you, Jude.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
... With life and the spice of... Some thoughtful observation has gone into this recipe, Jude... Opportunity may arrive by chance or be created, but we can jump one or other side of the fence when it comes to making a "right" decision as to how to use it. And standing still is the same as going backwards, so whatever we decide will be a step towards the good or the contrary.

... Having caught up reviewing the two I just missed, can't seem to shift out of this musical muse/gear... Beatles this time... "Dee, dee, dee, dee, dee, dee... It's just another day!" But not for viscious dictators, it seems... But, if we walk on Lou Reed's Wild Side and take a few chances here and there... good ones, I mean... perhaps we can make it Just A Perfect Day... if not for us, for someone else. Perhaps I'll make a pact with myself that to do nothing is not an option in the coming year, and see what happens.

Hmmm... if "doing nothing" is not an option, then maybe "saying nothing" is... Blame it on the curry... :)) K xx

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
Quite a synopsis...and still we keep spinning on the same axis. Let's hope we can all take some positives from this year into the next. Happy new year Jude! Panda :)

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
yep, around and around it goes

Reviewed on December 30, 2006
And another soul wasted in the wonderland. Beautiful poem

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
Anothe masterpiece in rememberance of 2006...well done!!

Happy New Year Jude!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
you have created quite a montage of 2006, Jude...splendid

~Carole

Reviewed by Karen Cino
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
Yes you have truly captured the yiear 2006 in the first half of your oem. The year 2006 has been filled with a lot of loss and death. Let's hope the future of 2007 is filled of peace and harmony.

Happy New Year!

~hugs~
Karen

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
Perfectly penned my friend,a lot of talent I see. God Bless, Holly

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
One of the best New Year's poems I have ever read, you not only captured the year 2006 you laid out a possible plan for 2007. Happy New Year to you and yours my friend.

Fee

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
This reminds me of that old soap mottto..."As the world turns, so do the days of our lives..."

I do hope we learn from all this!

Love and Peace~

Kimmy~

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
And you are just the shaman to shape that void, Jude!
Here's wishing you a very happy New Year, Poet,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
Balance is such an interesting event to watch :-) Apparently the answer is to detach, be aware, and move on........to where?

I have enjoyed your balancing act :-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
A vivid litany that brings us full circle into another year.May 2007 be all you wish it to be, for you and yours. Happy New Year!;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
I liked the see-saw of emotions, for such is humanity, evil on one scale and good on the other. What I wonder is which scale is the heaviest? A happy New Year, Robert. Victor

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
Another day in the cycle of man...we will never learn. Excellent
thought provoking piece Robert.

Allen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
well done-i like the hope in verse two, of course!

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
And we can always count on you to bring balance to this ever-tipsy world, through your magnificent talent, Jude!

A really unique composition, to seal the end of one year...and break forth into the New!

May it be Abundant and Fruitful, and bring your heart's desire!
Happy New Year, Brother..
Love&Prayers, Rhonda

Reviewed on December 29, 2006

"Another Revolution Around the Sun (2)"
Enjoyed this powerful, brief, and indepth summation.
A rather shock and awe I would say and of course true!
All things wonderful spiritual hugs and Happy New Year 2007.

Sincerely,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
It's all about freedom and choices and another year to make it good!
You thought of everything.
Love and happiest of New Years!
Susan

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
I like the yin and yang take on humanity Jude :)

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
Another great write my friend...your poem appears to be quick recap of many events that have happened during the year. It is our choice what we do, can't help the choices that others make. Lessons are learned from mistakes, the choice is ours. I intend on making 2007 a better year for myself. I don't like to make resolutions, but I will say that I am going to try to live healthier and make better choices toward exercise and eating, maybe get more sleep. Great write...happy New Year to you and yours.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
The choice is ours as to which things we let be the highlights of the year and of our time spent here. We have little control over what goes on around us, but we have absolute control over what goes on inside of us. Excellent recap of the year and of the opportunities that are still available to us if we wish to make the world a better place. Happy New Year to you and your family, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on December 29, 2006
There will always be another, and anaother...
Good write, Robert!!!

Happy New Year!!!!!

Lots of love,
Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
Life goes on?
Happy New Year!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
It is a process, isn't it Jude? Cicles come and cicles go, but I wonder what is it that we're learning from it all. Some, like you, think about this things. I'm afraid many don't and go on as if the world is never going to see the end of it all. Thank you for sharing your gift of poignancy.

Carmen

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
and....another gem fom you...beautiful Robert.Happy New Year to you and yours.
With love
from
kay


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