Another war, battle and pampas of genocide
Another round of hate and prejudice
Another bomb of mass destruction
Another dream lost its way
Another son missing on mountain hillsides
Another cycle of melting icecaps
Another zealot, preacher and imprudent leader
Another politician to bite the dust
Another family of heartache, blood and tears
Another father dead in shadows of the hood
Another daughter battered and bruised
Another wife strung out on meth
Another child without a home
Another chance to envision a future
Another opportunity to relinquish the odium of distrust
Another caretaker to assist in healing
Another volunteer to feed the hungry
Another remedy to heal the ill
Another dreamer to articulate the homeland
Another shaman to shape the void
Another door leading to hope
Another window opened to honesty
Another juncture to seek clarification
Another whisper roaring with truth
Another vision to see beyond the stars
Another poem balanced with life
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Reviews of "Another Revolution Around the Sun (2)"
A marvelous work of literary precision and ideological depth. The first half of ANOTHER REVOLUTION AROUND THE SUN forces the reader to confront the seemingly unavoidable challenges of violent modern-day confusions and delusions--while the second heroically provides "vision to see beyond the stars." The kind of literary art that adds quantities of value to one's outlook on life as the journey around the sun continues.
As I read this on the afternoon of New Year's Eve, I really have to stop and think of the devastation contrasted with the hope for the world and wonder just where I play even the tiniest part in all of this. Kinda freaks me out as I sit and muse over poetry when young men are risking their lives in Iraq...a returnee has graced my home over the last few days. Auld Lang Syne seems a redundant and needless approach, but maybe I should think again...listen to new lyrics and a new tune, and tlk a lesson for the old ones. I think I have a head start on it...even if my offerings are small.
Wow Jude, you forever keep me thinking and digging into my heart and my brain for answers.
Your poem conveys what has happened in the year 2006
And I hope and prayed for 2007 to bring us peace, it is easy to Understand, nice usage of rhymes. The words flowed
Love The tone and rhythm Excellent !!
Wishing you and your family a very Happy New Year!!
Morning Star
good contrasts--it's the world, isn't it? thanks for sharing
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
Great write,Happy New Years...Hugs
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
I like the frankness and honesty of each line. It is hard to believe that there is so much suffering going on in this world, despite all our so called "Progress." I like the balance you create with the structure and ending with visions of hope. "Another whisper roaring with truth" is an ingenius and effective use of oxymoron.
Have a safe and Happy New Year!
~Butch
Reviewed by S J (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
This is powerful, profound, and momentous! Your words speak volumes, Robert.
Superbly written!
Happy New Year ~
Thank you,
Sheila
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
What a brilliant summation, as so typical of you, Jude.
... With life and the spice of... Some thoughtful observation has gone into this recipe, Jude... Opportunity may arrive by chance or be created, but we can jump one or other side of the fence when it comes to making a "right" decision as to how to use it. And standing still is the same as going backwards, so whatever we decide will be a step towards the good or the contrary.
... Having caught up reviewing the two I just missed, can't seem to shift out of this musical muse/gear... Beatles this time... "Dee, dee, dee, dee, dee, dee... It's just another day!" But not for viscious dictators, it seems... But, if we walk on Lou Reed's Wild Side and take a few chances here and there... good ones, I mean... perhaps we can make it Just A Perfect Day... if not for us, for someone else. Perhaps I'll make a pact with myself that to do nothing is not an option in the coming year, and see what happens.
Hmmm... if "doing nothing" is not an option, then maybe "saying nothing" is... Blame it on the curry... :)) K xx
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
Quite a synopsis...and still we keep spinning on the same axis. Let's hope we can all take some positives from this year into the next. Happy new year Jude! Panda :)
Yes you have truly captured the yiear 2006 in the first half of your oem. The year 2006 has been filled with a lot of loss and death. Let's hope the future of 2007 is filled of peace and harmony.
Happy New Year!
~hugs~
Karen
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2006
Perfectly penned my friend,a lot of talent I see. God Bless, Holly
One of the best New Year's poems I have ever read, you not only captured the year 2006 you laid out a possible plan for 2007. Happy New Year to you and yours my friend.
A vivid litany that brings us full circle into another year.May 2007 be all you wish it to be, for you and yours. Happy New Year!;-)
Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
I liked the see-saw of emotions, for such is humanity, evil on one scale and good on the other. What I wonder is which scale is the heaviest? A happy New Year, Robert. Victor
"Another Revolution Around the Sun (2)"
Enjoyed this powerful, brief, and indepth summation.
A rather shock and awe I would say and of course true!
All things wonderful spiritual hugs and Happy New Year 2007.
Sincerely,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
Another great write my friend...your poem appears to be quick recap of many events that have happened during the year. It is our choice what we do, can't help the choices that others make. Lessons are learned from mistakes, the choice is ours. I intend on making 2007 a better year for myself. I don't like to make resolutions, but I will say that I am going to try to live healthier and make better choices toward exercise and eating, maybe get more sleep. Great write...happy New Year to you and yours.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
The choice is ours as to which things we let be the highlights of the year and of our time spent here. We have little control over what goes on around us, but we have absolute control over what goes on inside of us. Excellent recap of the year and of the opportunities that are still available to us if we wish to make the world a better place. Happy New Year to you and your family, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry
It is a process, isn't it Jude? Cicles come and cicles go, but I wonder what is it that we're learning from it all. Some, like you, think about this things. I'm afraid many don't and go on as if the world is never going to see the end of it all. Thank you for sharing your gift of poignancy.
Aberjhani
Ron
Love,
CJ
Have a Happy 2007, Jude.
Micke
Wow Jude, you forever keep me thinking and digging into my heart and my brain for answers.
Happy New Year!
Love,
Taylor xo
Regis
And I hope and prayed for 2007 to bring us peace, it is easy to Understand, nice usage of rhymes. The words flowed
Love The tone and rhythm Excellent !!
Wishing you and your family a very Happy New Year!!
Morning Star
enjoyed
Peace be with you
Happy New Year
William
Have a safe and Happy New Year!
~Butch
Superbly written!
Happy New Year ~
Thank you,
Sheila
... Having caught up reviewing the two I just missed, can't seem to shift out of this musical muse/gear... Beatles this time... "Dee, dee, dee, dee, dee, dee... It's just another day!" But not for viscious dictators, it seems... But, if we walk on Lou Reed's Wild Side and take a few chances here and there... good ones, I mean... perhaps we can make it Just A Perfect Day... if not for us, for someone else. Perhaps I'll make a pact with myself that to do nothing is not an option in the coming year, and see what happens.
Hmmm... if "doing nothing" is not an option, then maybe "saying nothing" is... Blame it on the curry... :)) K xx
Happy New Year Jude!!
Love Tinka
~Carole
Happy New Year!
~hugs~
Karen
Fee
I do hope we learn from all this!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Here's wishing you a very happy New Year, Poet,
Carolyn
I have enjoyed your balancing act :-)
Love,
Eileen
thought provoking piece Robert.
Allen
A really unique composition, to seal the end of one year...and break forth into the New!
May it be Abundant and Fruitful, and bring your heart's desire!
Happy New Year, Brother..
Love&Prayers, Rhonda
"Another Revolution Around the Sun (2)"
Enjoyed this powerful, brief, and indepth summation.
A rather shock and awe I would say and of course true!
All things wonderful spiritual hugs and Happy New Year 2007.
Sincerely,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
You thought of everything.
Love and happiest of New Years!
Susan
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Take care,
Sherry
Good write, Robert!!!
Happy New Year!!!!!
Lots of love,
Sandie Angel :o)
Happy New Year!
Carmen
With love
from
kay