Love it when you rhyme. Had some vivid dreams last night. One about a sea plane, on wheels, dragging deer parts on ropes behind and one strapped to the right pontoon, piloted by an exotic prince, that, after a long run through field, failed to take off, even while being pulled by a tireless stallion.
A most interestin take on the dream scene..
Must be a tad cool where you are at the mo eh!
HEHE, take pity on us downunder, we are being battered by four seasons at once, Belated HAPPY NY mate.
As I have come to expect from you, Robert, this is an exceptional poem. Well done.
Love,
CJ
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2007
I think when we sleep we can sometimes enter another level of consciousness, or find a place in between levels, which can reveal insight we may not be conscious of while awake. The trick is to retain it! -a beautiful write.
~Butch
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2007
Superb zen-like qualities incorporated into this profound and intuitive composition Jude. I'm always left contemplating on such a different level, ty for that. Panda :)
"Where we venture while we sleep
Will help us ponder how far and deep"
This poem actually has spoken volumes, I enjoyed the utter truth of this write. Perhaps if more were intuned to their inner selves or should I say the inner and outer realms of themselves they would be better off.
All the best to you now and always...
Health, Wealth, and Prosperity this 2007 to you,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
Dreams are the roads in the mind and the mind is infinite, eternal, and part of the whole. Your verses inspired me, Jude. Thank you. Happy New Year to you,
Regis
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 1, 2007
Dreams can be so inspiring as is your write. I am very fortunte and usually can remember more then one dream a night. One dream ended last night with a very loud question: Are you ready for your trip?
It will be interesting to see what that is about :-)
If I had to run a two legged fun- race in the 'unbridled space' of life I would want to run it with you as you are a winner ...especially with this poem.I love all the awesome lines in it.
Best wishes
from
kay.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2006
A fitting poem to end a year and begin a new one. Your last line sounds like a new year's resolution. Happy2007. Victor
Reviewed by Simon Barreiros (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2006
A really fine work. Filled with gentle nuance. Dreams seem to unbind the laces of our mind's shoe, freeing us to wander within through the mind and without through space and time. We can all enjoy and marvel at this phenom even without the Biochemical & Molecular Physics doctorates. Ain't it cool!
Really fine work and Happy New Year,
simon
This is a very profound write
I love the view of your poetic thoughts about
Where do we travel to when we are sleeping
I often wonder if we transcend in to another time
as we often dream !!well your write just place my mind
in a deep trance will ponder over this write for awhile!
Very nice Imagery an a vivid picture you have painted
With your chosen words!!
You Have A very Happy New Year!!
Morning Star
Dreams are a means of reminding us that we are much more than we believe ourselves to be and that nothing is impossible for us as long as we believe we can make it so. Dreams may stray from reality, but they never seem to go to the impossible. Happy New Year, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry
Oh yes... here's one to ponder about. I do believe we transcend to another plane when we sleep, whether we dream, or not. Being in tune with our spirituality is the key. Thank you Jude, for sending us off into 2007 with something to really think about.
I sometimes think, as we sleep, deep in our subconcious we seperate from self into some spiritual plane, so to speak, where cetain races compete...toward the hidden passageways and unopened rooms, as you put it...guiding us through a tomorrow, preparing us for the feat...
That's why I always have a bowl of Wheaties just before I go to bed! HA! Ya never know who or what you'll be up against!
Happy New Year Jude!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Helioseismology! Poetic flare sunspot burning into 2007! Nice to have made your acquaintance this past year, lead poet. I appreciate your poetic observations of depth. Happy New Year, Jude...
A timely metaphoric poem for beginning that '07 year.
Amazed at your rhyming and timing, my friend.
This one is good enough to reread along the way.
Slap Happy New Year to Ya' ! ! ! - Bill
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Keep dreaming.
Ron
Must be a tad cool where you are at the mo eh!
HEHE, take pity on us downunder, we are being battered by four seasons at once, Belated HAPPY NY mate.
Your Smarty pants OZzie pal
Ch'erie
blessin's
cynth'ya
Happy New Year!!!!!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Love,
CJ
~Butch
be blessed 2007
"Finish Line"
"Where we venture while we sleep
Will help us ponder how far and deep"
This poem actually has spoken volumes, I enjoyed the utter truth of this write. Perhaps if more were intuned to their inner selves or should I say the inner and outer realms of themselves they would be better off.
All the best to you now and always...
Health, Wealth, and Prosperity this 2007 to you,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
Love,
Eileen
Regis
It will be interesting to see what that is about :-)
A Happy Clappy New Year Poet!!
Love Tinka
Happy New Year Jude!
~hugs~
Karen
Peace. Joyce
Will help us ponder how far and deep
Venture On, Dream Walker - and Happy New Year to you, too.
Best wishes
from
kay.
Really fine work and Happy New Year,
simon
I love the view of your poetic thoughts about
Where do we travel to when we are sleeping
I often wonder if we transcend in to another time
as we often dream !!well your write just place my mind
in a deep trance will ponder over this write for awhile!
Very nice Imagery an a vivid picture you have painted
With your chosen words!!
You Have A very Happy New Year!!
Morning Star
Happy New Year...
Allen
I like this idea
its universal
happy new yrs
pax A
Take care,
Sherry
Carmen
That's why I always have a bowl of Wheaties just before I go to bed! HA! Ya never know who or what you'll be up against!
Happy New Year Jude!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Have a beautiful and Blessed New year Jude.
Joselyn
Magnetism & Luminosity,
Sage
Amazed at your rhyming and timing, my friend.
This one is good enough to reread along the way.
Slap Happy New Year to Ya' ! ! ! - Bill