cerebral hibernation; a critical survival tactic. well said, jude. embrace the mood herein fully. getting lost amongst the stars helps as well...
peace,
carolyn
Very powerful write my friend as is a very thought provoking piece. I have a special place here on my farm that I visit when the world seems to overwhelm me...I love to sit by the creek where I can hear the water flowing over the stones in the creekbed, I sit beneath the tree on the ground near the creek bank and love to stare into the clear creek waters, it is so soothing that it almost transports one into a different world for a little while anyway. I can block out the sounds of life around me and meditate on peace and tranquility, it's great to escape for a brief time, but then soon reality returns..can relate well. Great write my dear friend.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Reviewed by S J (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
I truly love this piece, Robert, and I shall save it.
Seerenity and that "Zen-like staring"...oh I know the way, but to oblivion, I'm not certain I could ever really get there...but I can certainly tune out everything and veryone for a few moments,when need be.
Love,
Taylor
Shhhhhhhhhhhhh!! Do not disturb!! OK... Well, red rag to a bull is this... You should have put up a "Keep Out Kate" notice on this one if you wanted to maintain your peace and quiet! Otherwise, for a full-on spiritual party-goer such as me, this just calls for dynamic debate. Firstly, to reach this state of release into oblivion takes, I imagine, GREAT concentration and discipline, screening out as you well describe all the surrounding destractions: it ain't just floating off somewhere nice and cushy in a dreamlike fashion. Many of the peeps below me have spoken of meditation, clearing the thoughts as a sleep-hygiene process or whatever. Meditation, as I understand it, is focussing the mind on SOMETHING in order to become completely at one with its essence and thereby attaining a gateway for a different plane of consciousness. But you would appear to go beyond that cacoon here, speaking of dissipation into OBLIVION, nothingness... a very different thing. From my very limited experience of such things, oblivion isn't like being asleep and released from the body in that way. It is being aware of the spirit in the total depths of darkest space where there is nothing to give parameters to self's essence and where the sense of extreme isolation and lostness is intense - such that it is the ONLY occasion EVER in my somewhat eventful life to have actually made me scream out loud, long and hard. On that basis, I can only construe that oblivion isn't a nice state to be in and is not to be recommended. But freeing the mind of bodily constraints in a meditative way is perhaps just giving back to the mind some pre-eminence in this day and age when we shrink it to pea-size for the convenience of our physically squeezed hard-pressed lives.
I DO apologise for taking up all this time and space, heavily outweighing your 5 clean couplets. But the notion of "oblivion" rattles my bars for certain sure. We both believe, I think, that the human spirit will live on outside of our degenerating human frame, and I firmly believe that post-death our essences do not sleep - that is NOT an option. But, on what I have tasted, there's no way that I want folks to think that oblivion sounds kinda cosy, either. I rest my case. Thank you for bearing with me.
When I do envision no body, I feel as though my spirit swells and takes on the power to touch and be part of the entire universe. This is a very good mood piece, Jude, placing the reader in the doorway of a meditative moment.
Take care,
Sherry
Sometimes it's really difficult to get detached from all the noise and distraction. When I was in my twenties, Robert, I studied Buddhism for a season. Those times I spent in meditation were actually very intoxicating and a most glorious peace ensued. Peace of mind is one of the most important things in life for me now.
Blessings ...
My advice is to completely relax and meditation
some times helps to clear the mind
from all kinds of daily distractions.
Excellent Imagery And flow!!
Love And Peace To You Always..Morning Star
This reigns, solitude of the mind. I so need this in order to get to sleep and to help me face the new day ahead!
"Release"~ another fascinating write,Jude!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
Relax your head and work your way down to your toes to completely feel at peace,I try every night,sometimes it works sometimes it doesn't,Thanks for sharing,
Michael
Excellent description, Robert, and I can really relate! Interestingly, it's almost exactly how I calm myself at night as I prepare for sleep, starting with my toes and working my way up, making each part 'disappear'. It works and I can usually fall asleep before I ever get up to my head. Very well done, my friend!
Love,
CJ
Ah, detachment, a necessary personal safety valve in a world of unwelcome intrusion into our lives. As a social worker type, I wear detachment in my holster daily, occasionally failing to draw it quick enough, and suffering the consequences.
The principle applies spiritually too as your poem infers.
A compelling reminder of its importance in our lives.
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
soooooo familiar..
Thankyou for expressing that familiarity in words..
brilliant work!
OOOOh this conjurs up some awful images, madame la Guillotine, could certainly envison no body LOL, sorry been watching Lady JANE, gotta get my mind right.
Actually I do this all the time, zap outa reality, it's relaxing and cool.
Hugs
Ch'erie
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2007
I can see him there, on a bed, eyes vacant. Victor
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
loved the idea of
"releasing the mind to all"
peace,
carolyn
~hugs~
Karen
Hugs Angela
Aberjhani
love and peace, Carole
Peace. Joyce
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
"Release" Excellently penned!
Thank you,
Sheila
Love,
Taylor
I DO apologise for taking up all this time and space, heavily outweighing your 5 clean couplets. But the notion of "oblivion" rattles my bars for certain sure. We both believe, I think, that the human spirit will live on outside of our degenerating human frame, and I firmly believe that post-death our essences do not sleep - that is NOT an option. But, on what I have tasted, there's no way that I want folks to think that oblivion sounds kinda cosy, either. I rest my case. Thank you for bearing with me.
Koolkalmandcollected Kate xx
LOve Tinka
Take care,
Sherry
it's difficult to get detached and if
you can there lies some peace
Blessings ...
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
some times helps to clear the mind
from all kinds of daily distractions.
Excellent Imagery And flow!!
Love And Peace To You Always..Morning Star
Releasing the mind to all
Now that sounds like something we all should try.
"Release"~ another fascinating write,Jude!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Michael
Quite a dimensional visualization.
Love,
CJ
The principle applies spiritually too as your poem infers.
A compelling reminder of its importance in our lives.
Thankyou for expressing that familiarity in words..
brilliant work!
Saved this one..
Vesna:)
Actually I do this all the time, zap outa reality, it's relaxing and cool.
Hugs
Ch'erie
Keep releasing gems such as this Jude,
cynth'ya